Fur and Feathers

By Eireann

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Chapter 6

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Sub-commander T'Pol moved into the lush undergrowth with the appropriate care, studying the readings on her scanner with interest. Some of these plant forms were truly fascinating, and would make valuable contributions to the ship’s exobiology database. She began recording her findings conscientiously, but did not forget to glance up repeatedly to where the two men were making a cautious way towards the water in the middle of the gully.

Although in the usual course of things she would not have approved of a detour for no more vital reasons than the need for a wash, there was no doubt that her two fellow crewmen were sorely in need of it. For some reason the memory of Commander Tucker’s face powdered with yellow pollen struck her as being humorous. She dismissed the thought firmly and concentrated on the scanner readings; at least until voices told her that the men had reached the water. She just happened to be looking in that direction again when the commander stripped down the top half of his coveralls, and she saw the broad muscular shoulders under the blue vest. The unwelcome thought slid into her mind that it was rather unlikely that Koss would have such a powerfully built upper body. She banished that with speed. It was wholly irrelevant. Naturally, he would be healthy – Vulcans took care of their bodies, unlike so many Humans who systematically abused their digestive systems by regularly consuming animal flesh. His disciplined and highly developed brain was far more important than his body, she pursued. There could be no doubt who was the superior in that respect. He was intelligent and highly-respected. Had their betrothal not been ended by his parents on what to T'Pol seemed inadequate grounds-she would have, after all, eventually returned to Vulcan to marry after her time on Enterprise was ended, but without the occurrence of ponfarr there was no need for haste- her eventual marriage to him would have been no more than logical. To be sure, they hardly knew one another, but she had no doubt that in due course they would have established a relationship of mutual regard.

Having established all this in her mind as indisputable fact, it was with surprising difficulty that she drew her gaze away from the breadth of Commander Tucker’s shoulders and returned it to the scanner. It was at this point, however, that her acute hearing picked up the sound of hooves. She looked up again quickly. Now even the Humans had caught it; she saw Ensign McKenna’s head turn quickly, and Commander Tucker straightened up.

Seconds later it became apparent that the newcomers were other denizens of the planet, and that they had seen the Humans out on the watercourse. This was a most unwelcome development. Tucker was a chief engineer whose talents in that respect she had come to acknowledge (if only to herself) as remarkable, but as a diplomat he was singularly wanting. She was unacquainted with Ensign McKenna’s diplomatic skills, but it was unlikely that Lieutenant Reed had selected him for his ability to conduct sensitive inter-species negotiations with any particular ease. At least she had noticed that morning that the Commander had had the forethought to bring the translator. It should be possible to conduct a conversation – although given the fact that Shiránnor had warned them yesterday about the width of the gulf between their civilisations, and she herself shared the Captain’s determination to avoid contaminating pre-warp cultures, it would certainly be best for the encounter to be kept as brief as could be contrived.

She saw the small group of new arrivals split up. The fact that seven of them were heavily armored could not be considered significant in itself on a world ruled by brutality and superstition, but nevertheless, as five of the soldiers advanced on the two men T'Pol watched with growing concern. At least Commander Tucker had the wisdom to reach quickly for the translator. They might not be Starfleet’s best diplomats, but they were amply intelligent enough to weigh up their chances against five mounted men: neither fight nor flight was an option. At least, she noted, the new arrivals included women. Given the Commander’s reprehensible tendency to seduce almost any female he came across, what he sometimes referred to as his ‘Southern charm’ might yet prove an extremely valuable asset for once.

The attack was so swift that she hardly saw what happened. For a moment she wondered why Ensign McKenna doubled up so strangely, and then as the sunlight splintered off the stained blade she understood. She saw Commander Tucker react with shock and fury, and heard his bellow of defiance ring around the gully. The phase pistol was in her hand as though it had leaped into it of its own volition; her mind was suddenly flooded with an icy rage that neither her upbringing nor her heritage could control. It did not affect her ability to think clearly: she never for a moment lost sight of the ramifications of intervention with a phase pistol. But the prospect of standing idle while the chief engineer was struck down in the same cruel manner was quite simply unthinkable. It would not require her to kill – there were a number of available options for scaring away people who had never encountered an energy blast before.

Having decided on the most effective course of action, she stepped forward, raised her hand and took careful aim. In the same instant, out of the corner of her eye she saw what looked like a small patch of bark on a nearby tree detach itself and jump at her leg. In the next second it was hanging on to the fabric of her uniform and an agonising pain in her thigh told her that she had been bitten. That in itself was bad enough, but the bite was obviously venomous: a powerful toxin began to circulate through her body, spreading upwards from the injury site on a wave of numbness. Her head began to spin. Her legs buckled. She dropped the phase pistol, unable to focus or fire it, and slowly she toppled to the ground.

Time became dreamlike. As she stared upwards, the trees seemed to revolve against the sky in some strange dance. She could hear voices, even though there was nobody there, but they were talking nonsense. Something was dreadfully wrong. Somebody needed her. Somebody she – cared for – somebody – danger – blood –

A second pain, worse than the first, lanced through her and she cried aloud. But as though this somehow counteracted the toxin, the confusion started to ebb, and as reality began to come back she slowly regained the mental disciplines that would help her to deal with the situation. After a couple of minutes she was able to sit up – just in time to see a superbly camouflaged creature that resembled some kind of flying squirrel slither back onto the tree from which it had ambushed her. Its fur was so perfectly patterned that once it became still again she could hardly see it, even though she knew exactly where it was. With difficulty she slithered backwards in case it attacked her again. Then she took stock of her injuries. Her leg clearly showed the large puncture where the creature had bitten her first. It was still oozing blood, but was not life threatening. More worrying by far was the second injury: the torn fabric of her uniform showed where there was an incision slightly lower on her thigh that had been made with surgical precision, and her lightly exploring fingers found a lump underneath it.

Other issues came back to her in a series of random realisations as she staggered back to her feet. Enterprise. Ensign McKenna. Commander Tucker. She lifted her head and stared out across the river. The bird-people had gone, and so had their prisoner. Only a motionless splash of royal-blue fabric out in the middle of the watercourse remained.

She picked up her scanner and the phase pistol and began walking as quickly as her unsteady legs would carry her towards where the men had reached the watercourse. Navigating the treacherous footing seemed to take years, but soon she was stooping over Ensign McKenna. To her surprise, and relief, although he was unconscious there was still a faint pulse under his jaw; it was feeble and irregular, and his skin was the color of paper. If it was not already too late to save him, it very shortly would be.

Her hand dropped to the pocket where she kept her communicator, but there was nothing there. After a moment’s confusion she remembered exchanging it for the phase pistol. The Commander had taken charge of it and he was gone. McKenna had not brought one with him. As she stared around in something like very unVulcan despair, a stray shaft of sunlight breaking through the heavy dark clouds now once more building up ominously in the sky gleamed on a small object in a pool a short distance away that reflected its brilliance with a hard metallic luster.

The translator. She picked it up and found with relief that it was undamaged. Luckily its circuits had been built to resist immersion in water and its built-in communications device could be reprogrammed to contact the ship, but first the unconscious Human needed to be removed from the water: its constant flow over his body would drain his body heat and combine with the blood loss to send him into shock, if it hadn’t done so already. She braced her feet in the most secure footholds she could find, squatted down, and gathered the unconscious armory officer in her arms. In ordinary circumstances she would have lifted and carried him with little effort, but the pain from her leg meant that she needed to concentrate desperately hard to carry him safely to the bank, where she laid him down among the ferns as being the most sheltered place available. Frowning in an effort to clear the last stubborn shreds of uncertainty from her mind, she opened the translator and began working on it. A series of simple commands that would ordinarily have taken her seconds became unbelievably complex operations to her fog-shrouded brain. Away in the west the low rumble of thunder added its menacing note as she struggled.

At last the reprogramming was complete. She thumbed the call button. “T’Pol to ... to Enterprise.”

“Archer here.” He sounded relieved. “What took you so long, Sub-commander? We thought you’d decided to dig that hyrellanium out with your fingernails.”

“Captain. There has been a...” she fought to imagine the right word. “A development. Ensign McKenna is seriously injured. He should be beamed up immediately for Doctor Phlox to treat him.”

“A ‘development’?” She could picture him rising in dismay from the command chair, the cheerful expression wiped off his face. “What sort of ‘development’?”

“It would take too long to explain, Captain. Please arrange for the transport. The ensign’s wounds are life threatening.” She heard him rap out the orders, and then Lieutenant Reed’s interruption.

“Captain. There’s another storm approaching. Not as big as the last one, but it’s producing a lot of molecular disturbance in the atmosphere that could affect the sequencing. If we use the transporter I can’t guarantee that McKenna will survive it.”

“If you do not use it I can absolutely guarantee that he will not survive,” said T'Pol levelly. “He has minutes to live at most if he remains here.”

“Alert the transporter room. Get Phlox and his team there on the double,” snapped Archer. “Half a chance is better than none. Hoshi, can you get a fix on McKenna’s location?”

“Yes, sir.” The Ensign’s voice was clearly audible. “With Sub-commander T'Pol. But – Commander Tucker isn’t with them.”

“T'Pol?” Archer’s suddenly dry throat forced him to swallow before he spoke; she noted the infinitesimal pause. “Was Trip part of this – ‘development’? Why isn’t he with you?”

“Commander Tucker has been captured, sir. When I last saw him he had sustained no serious injury.”

“And were you hurt?”

“I may need Doctor Phlox’s assistance in due course.” She ran a hand gingerly over the lump in her thigh; the flesh around it was swollen and angry. “But for the present I believe that I am able to function almost normally.”

“You say Trip’s been – captured? Captured by whom?”

The faint sound of the transporter beam locking on to Ensign McKenna’s body made her step backwards to be out of its range. The shimmer as the molecules dissolved struck her as being quite remarkably fascinating. She drew her gaze away from it with an effort at the almost panic-stricken sound of the Captain’s voice: “T’Pol?”

“By what I presume were another of this world’s peoples,” she said flatly. “They were humanoid with noticeable avian characteristics. They came upon the ensign and the commander when they were refreshing themselves in a small stream and took them unawares. In the ensuing confrontation the ensign was badly wounded. The commander attempted to evade capture, but he did not succeed.”

“And how were you able to escape?”

“I was not with them at the time, Captain.” Briefly she explained about her decision to explore the flora of the area rather than the refreshing properties of the river water. “I therefore observed everything that happened. I was attempting to intervene when I was attacked by a small animal whose toxin temporarily disabled me. As soon as I recovered I assessed Ensign McKenna’s condition and contacted the ship.”

“We’ve got McKenna up safely. Stand by and we’ll pick you up.”

“With respect, Captain, I refuse. I believe it would be more logical for me to remain here and attempt to rescue Commander Tucker.”

“We’ll get a fix on him too, once we have you on board.”

“Lieutenant Reed will confirm that the storm is worsening rapidly in this area.” All around her the rising wind was whipping the trees, and the first fingers of lightning were clawing at the clouds. “It would be illogical to rescue the commander by killing him with the transporter.”

“She’s got a point, Captain.” Reed’s reluctant concurrence sounded in the background. “They had a bit of a struggle with McKenna apparently.”

Archer paused. “OK. But you take no unnecessary risks. That’s an order, T'Pol!”

“Understood. T'Pol out.” She closed the com-link and stood for a moment considering. Then she removed the scanner from her pocket and replaced it with the translator – unlike Starfleet regulation uniforms, her suit did not have a number of useful, if utilitarian, zipped pockets in various locations. For the first time she found this a disadvantage, since she now had three devices to look after. It took her moments to re-programme the scanner; apart from the occasional moment of dizziness her mental faculties were restoring themselves quickly to full efficiency as the toxin was eliminated from her system. Physically, apart from the throbbing sensation around the lump in her thigh she had no remaining problems that would interfere with her concentration. The discomfort from the large wet area across her torso where she had had to cradle Ensign McKenna while carrying him out of the watercourse was minor enough to ignore completely.

The kidnappers had not gone far. Doubtless they too had noted the onset of the storm and had decided to seek shelter. Unfortunately, it appeared that the ten she had seen had been no more than a fraction of the actual number traveling; a sizeable entourage was encamped further down the watercourse. She studied the readout carefully. It was not difficult to pick up Commander Tucker’s Human bio-signs among the aliens’. The data suggested that some kind of temporary camp was hurriedly being set up, and that could be made to work to her advantage. While it rained they would be more concerned with keeping dry than keeping watch – and by Shiránnor’s account less alert for potential enemies than they would on another world less thoroughly cowed into subjection than this one. She might find her chance in the storm.

TBC


Comments:

Cogito

I chuckle at the way T'Pol's thoughts keep coming back to Trip, no matter how firmly she banishes them. :)

I may not care for the way T'Pol got herself into that situation, but her reaction was very vivid. I can see the camoflaged animal leaping at her as sooon as she turned her back, and it seems to be very cleverly evolved to surprise and temporarily disable its prey in order to implant them - we have to presume with some sort of eggs or lavae. And at the same time we start to see clues that she is already becoming quite attached to the chief engineer, especially when her conscious mind is out of action and we start to see what her subconscious feels about the situation. (Yes, I'm certain that feeling is the right word, no matter how she may try to suppress it.)

Although T'Pol's ability to locate Trip and his captors with her scanner makes me wonder "But, then, why the heck didn't you ...?" and Hoshi's success at locating him with the transporter makes me wonder why nobody there noticed an armoured cavalry troop approach, capture and carry off a member of their away team, at least T'Pol is in a position to do something about it. I think she's right - this storm is probably her best chance to get in close and try to rescue him. But how will the desert dweller cope with this torrential rain? It must be horribly cold and unpleasant for her, at least. Trip, on the other hand, is probably feeling home from home. Probably more so than his avian captors - I can't imagine that they will like the rain at all.

Asso

Well I can understand Transwarp. But I feel that the overall vision we have of the story is that of something that proceeds at full gallop. And about this, there is no doubt that the goal is reached.

Now, returning to Trip and T'Pol ... when they will love each other? When, huh? When?;););););)

Transwarp

You have a point, Distracted.  And I am willing to overlook a great deal for the sake of a good story.

My goal as a writer (and I think this is true--or should be true--of other writers) is to catch my reader's interest and pull them into the story.  Therefore anything that distracts from the story, that causes the reader to pull back and say, 'huh?' is NOT a good thing.

Do I always hit that mark in my own writing?  (Wait, don't answer that!  I suspect I'd hear a resounding 'HELL NO!')  But when I do miss the mark I want to know about it, and I want to know *why* I missed.

In this case, some of the actions of the away teams have been so... perplexing... that they have completely thrown me out of the story.  Does it mean I don't like what you are doing overall?  No.  Does it mean I am going to stop reading?  No.  But it is an unnecessary distraction that you should be aware is there.

I hope I am not being too harsh (I try not to be).  Eireann, I have already said this and will repeat it for emphasis:  Your writing is VERY good, both technically and stylistically.  Your scenes are dynamic, your descriptions are vivid, and your dialogue is crisp and in-character.  Best of all your aliens are totally fascinating.  I am looking forward to the coming interactions with this latest species.

If smart characters that do everything right make for dull storytelling, then comments that only contain superlatives make for dull and uninformative reviews.

Please do not become discouraged!

Distracted

Give her a break, guys. Smart characters that do everything right make for pretty dull storytelling, if you ask me.

Cogito

Oh no, she's been "face hugged"!

Under the circumstances I'll let T'Pol off for her inaction when KcKenna and Trip were attacked, but somebody needs to give her a severe talking to for putting the three of them in such a tactically dangerous situation. School kids literally going for a walk in the park would be expected to show more common sense than this three showed today. And look, nobody on the ship was monitoring where they were or even something so obvious as a major change in weather conditions?

Get back to the ship, T'Pol, and get that nasty thing sorted out before it starts burrowing through you to somewhere it can't be removed from. There are plenty of other people who can monitor Trip's position from the ship and follow him on the ground, it would be illogical of you to ignore a potentially life-threatening parasite for no good reason. You've already shown that you are hopelessly outclassed by trees and grass and primitives armed with edged weapons so there's no point you blundering around making things worse.

Oh, and you'd better toss that Vulcan scanner too, because it seems to be worse than useless.

I really want to like this story because I love the writing style and the characters, but their total lack of even basic common sense makes it very difficult to care what happens. If T'Pol decides to ignore the parasite until it becomes life-threatening, am I going to give a damn?

 

Transwarp

The quality of your writing is good, but the incompetence being displayed by the crew of Enterprise is becoming a serious distraction for me, to the point that it is interfering with my ability to enjoy the story.  On top of the bumbling errors of their previous visit, we find that today they have only ONE communicator between the three of them.  Really?  And just ONE phase pistol?   Then two of them run off to go skinny dipping, on the advice of T'Pol (who didn't see anything on herr scanner--presumably the same scanner that didn't detected anything the day before, or the natives this day, or the tree bark creature.  One wonders why she even carries it.)

And guess what?  Another storm is brewing, which Enterprise evidently decided the landing party didn't need to know about prior to the emergency.  You'd think they'd have thought it important to notify someone on the ground well in advance of it developing to the point where it interfered with the transporter.

I'm having hard time developing *any* sympathy for their predicament, which could have been so easily avoided had they taken a few rudimentary precautions.  Which is a shame, because there is so much else to like here.

 

 

Alelou

Very compelling.  Glad McKenna didn't end up as a dead red shirt.  Can't help wonder what sort of predator would let her get away after a disabling bite, though.  Intrigued to hear more.

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