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Whoa. Great pick. That scene really is something. Thanks

Well, it didn't make the final five. Neither did either of mine. As a matter of fact, when I was trying to rank the ones that did make it, I found myself in the unenviable position of choosing the least of five evils. All five had spelling or format issues. One actually had Riker at the wheel of the truck that ran down Edith Keeler, and another one had Guinan as captain of a ship with Wesley as her first officer.

Sigh. The next round's not gonna be pretty.

What the FRELL????



Dammit I really wanted to make the Borg sing and dance.

Oh. Dude. I think I've just read like the worst scene ever. I don't think there was like one word in there that's actually in the dictionary. And there's like 8 different alternate spellings for "Guardian" and neither of them is correct.

LOL - I found this one fic on fanlib titled "The Borg Envasion"

I was like WTF? and I had to comment that it looks pretty silly that he or she was using a word in the title that wasn't even in the dictionary. Dude - it's "Invasion" - ain't nothing like using a spell checker, right?

Damn those Borg. Now they're fraking with our alphabet too.

Rigil Kent wrote:Damn those Borg. Now they're fraking with our alphabet too.

Just read the winning round 2 entry like for the first time. Distracted I really liked yours and the one you recommended like way better. Well that one was like okay, thought it was kinda stale though until the end.

Grumble grumble:
"There are a lot that can go wrong" etc or whatever okay fine so I'm not like a beta reader or something but I'm dyslexic and stuff like that like totally disrupts the already slow flow of words to my tiny little brain.

I'm all out of ideas to continue this one...and there's already a round 3 entry up! What do these people do? Write one for each finalist during the voting process and then post the one that follows the winner a minute after the round opens? Hmmm. Wish I'dve thought of that.

Here's a link to the Round 2 winner, just in case anyone's interested:

Too Little, Too Late

Distracted wrote:I'm all out of ideas to continue this one...

Well you could always make them sing and dance. It's not gonna win you anything but it's fun!

My round 3 entry's up. I know I've used the title before, but it's appropriate. Tell me what you think.

The Needs of the Many

Distracted wrote:My round 3 entry's up. I know I've used the title before, but it's appropriate. Tell me what you think.

The Needs of the Many

I can't really get into it. That's not your fault, mind you, but rather the constraints of what you had to work with. I'd have much rather read the resolution to the Borged out Guardian. What they gave you to work with this time is, frankly, pedestrian and really boring.

It's well written though.

Cool!! See you're not out of ideas yet. Though I agree with Rigil that I'd prefer your Borgified Guardian storyline or the other entry you recommended, I think they're like way more engaging and would make a better ground to build a scene #3 on, but oh well you got what you got, and I think you did a great job and like way elevated it from its scene #2 staleness.

I still wish I could make the Borg sing and dance though. Grumble grumble.

Do it anyway, T. As indicated by the frankly stale "winners", they really need someone like you to shake things up.

Rigil Kent wrote:Do it anyway, T. As indicated by the frankly stale "winners", they really need someone like you to shake things up.

Like their mechanic little Borg booties? (poor Rigil's gonna get an aneurism )

Oh. Sudden brainfart. I'm starting to get like images of the Borg vs. Species 8472 as a Broadway stage production.