Page 6 of 7

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:11 pm
by blacknblue
We ain't winding it up. It is just getting started. We just wound up this chapter.

It was a back breaker for some reason, that's all. You know how it goes. Some stories come easy. Some stories fight you. This one was savage.

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:52 pm
by Linda
Goody! So there will be lots more! But please do a humorous one or something else between these that fight you. I am sure they all will be fun to read. BTW I just submitted my Day the Earth Stood Still story to Triaxian Silk.

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:56 pm
by Asso
Linda wrote: ... Day the Earth Stood Still...


Even the title is exciting!

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:59 pm
by blacknblue
Good. You should get some interesting comments on that one.

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:08 pm
by Linda
Read Chapter 3 of the Lerteiran Chronicles over on the Guardian of Forever. A rich, refreshing story as always! If this is what comes out of you two fighting...keep on fighting. :badgrin: :popcorn:

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:26 pm
by Asso
I too, have read "The Lerteiran Chronicles", chapter 3 and, as I said on "the Guardian of Forever", I must tell it.
Even if I enjoyed "The Lerteiran Chronicles" since the beginning, it was lightly "foreign" to me. Honestly, I was liking it, but not in every part.
This time it's totally different, and - believe me - not only because there's many (and splendidly well done) passages about the love story of my loved couple. :) (You were right, Distracted!) :)
The fact is that everything is made with real care.
Everything works very well.
And the pace is perfect.
And besides... how much ideas!
Really great! :D

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:24 pm
by krn
I think this was your best one yet (a little tnt goodness never hurts either ;) )

The story and action were really great, well paced and flowed really well. Looking forward to the next installment...

...same Vulcan time... same Vulcan channel

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 4:59 am
by Navigator
Just read chapter 3. What a great way to end a snowy day, which you would not expect just north of Mississippi in March. I find the Vulcan Captain hilarious. It is obvious she has not dealt with humans before. She needs lots of meditation time. The observation about Archer having fangs was exactly like things you think about people when you first meet them.

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 5:53 am
by blacknblue
Oh yeah. That reminds me, in case nobody noticed yet. Part three is now up on TriS.

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:01 pm
by evcake
Re: chapter 3
Lest my praise be too fulsome, I will communicate in smileys.
:bow: :bow: :bow:

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:31 pm
by blacknblue
:faint:

She's done it to me again...

:banghead:

You will regret this, Lady. They are going to end up settling the issue with a stylus duel over the briefing room table. I swear they will...

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:34 pm
by evcake
:popcorn:

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 2:26 am
by Distracted
blacknblue wrote::faint:

She's done it to me again...

:banghead:

You will regret this, Lady. They are going to end up settling the issue with a stylus duel over the briefing room table. I swear they will...


Huh? What are you talking about? Are you talking to ME? What'd I do this time?

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 2:40 am
by blacknblue
You left me with unresolved conflict to play with. You KNOW what happens when I have unresolved conflict to play with. :D

*rubs hands with evil cackle of glee*

"Muwahahahaha!"

Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:47 am
by Distracted
Oh. Well, good then. Have fun! :D