New story by BnB and Distracted

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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby evcake » Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:20 pm

Am I supposed to feel sorry for her beacuse of her sad life, or is it OK for me to want to see Raijin strangled with her own garter belt?
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Asso » Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:23 pm

Mh...
A very attractive scene! :badgrin:
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby evcake » Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:07 pm

:lol: You're incorrigible. :lol:
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Asso » Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:30 pm

Thanks! :D
Well yes. I continue to write. And on Fanfiction.Net, for those who want, it is possible to cast a glance at my latest efforts. We arrived to
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Linda » Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:56 pm

Evcake, nah, you don't have to feel sorry for Raijin. She's got some reckoning coming even if she was forced to spy on the Enterprise crew. It was her choice how to go about it. Heck, she could have asked for asylum with the humans. She could have gotten away from her slave masters by coming clean with Archer about how she got on the ship. Love to see how Bnb and Dis handle it!
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Asso » Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:00 pm

So, I repeat.
A very attractive scene! :mrgreen:
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Mitchell » Sun Jan 13, 2008 3:35 am

Lovin this story!!
BnB, an Distracted you two make for an awesome teamup. 8)


evcake wrote:Am I supposed to feel sorry for her beacuse of her sad life, or is it OK for me to want to see Raijin strangled with her own garter belt?

:? While Id like to see that to,,, I cant help but also understand her view. :roll: While I cant beleave Im using these exact words. But Archer wasnt as bad as she made him, an Us humans in genral out to be. But she has, an got the Native to the Expanse view/story of the events told to her 2nd, 3rd, 4th, an so on from the Xindi, an first hand from the :roll: truthfull Nausicans. An since both races seemed to have "Possession" of her, Im betting her lil bag of tricks dont work on Nausican, an Reptilian thick heads. :?


Besides I cant help but think She's gona get Hunted down. 8) After all we Humans are awefully good at Hunting pesky lil critters.
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby evcake » Sun Jan 13, 2008 5:20 am

It's just I've always thought the scene with T'Pol was played as if she was enjoying herself - relishing T'Pol's resistance.
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby blacknblue » Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:22 pm

Consider if you will, how Daniel might react once he wakes up?
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Linda » Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:56 pm

Pissed as hell? That's what I would expect of Daniel. But glad to be back aboard his ship. I like Daniel's spunk - and sense of humor. But I don't think he's gonna show that side of him to T'Riss and Raijiin when he first wakes up.
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Bookworm » Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:01 am

I can't wait to read more of this story. It's awesome.
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Distracted » Fri Feb 08, 2008 1:59 pm

Go poke BnB with a stick, then. He's got the ball. 8)
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby blacknblue » Fri Feb 08, 2008 3:11 pm

I'm workin' on it! I'm workin' on it!

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"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby blacknblue » Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:07 pm

Part 3 was submitted last night. It was 57 hard fought pages. Me and Dis fought like cats and dogs over every single page of it. :D

Seriously. This one was a lot of work. I'm glad it's over. I think I am ready for something light-hearted and easy on the nerves now, like the MU. I agree with Jenrali, I have had enough excitement for a while.
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Re: New story by BnB and Distracted

Postby Linda » Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:00 pm

Fought like cats and dogs? LOL, the outcome of that must be spectacular! :shock: Sounds like you are winding up this story too? Okay...how about something humorous now? Some cultural misunderstanding that ends in a funny incident? Ricky and Lucy Ricardo stuff. T'Pol can be the perfect straight man to Trip's escapades! :lol: :thumbsup: Sorta like Spock was for Kirk.
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