The Short SHORT version
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Re: The Short SHORT version
Whoopsie. Let me see if I can knock off some syllables:
Yeah, we hit it off
No! A perfect gentleman!
What?!! You're kiddin’ me . . .
The PG-13 version:
Yeah, we hit it off
No! A perfect gentleman!
@#%*!! You're kiddin’ me . . .
Yeah, we hit it off
No! A perfect gentleman!
What?!! You're kiddin’ me . . .
The PG-13 version:
Yeah, we hit it off
No! A perfect gentleman!
@#%*!! You're kiddin’ me . . .
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Re: The Short SHORT version
Fishsticks was my first thought. But no. It's Unexpected, isn't it? Brilliant!
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Are you ready to try a haiku, Cogito?
Go for it.
Go for it.
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Your guess is correct! Go, Cogito!
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Re: The Short SHORT version
OK, jus' gimme a minute here ...
Re: The Short SHORT version
It's a cheap shot, but the little grey cells are still asleep over here ...
Whitespace calls to her.
He is gone; too long alone.
Would she see him here?
Whitespace calls to her.
He is gone; too long alone.
Would she see him here?
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Grey (Gray) cells asleep. Yep.
I know the episode but I cannot thnk of the name of it. Not unusual.
Oh well, I don't understand sylables (sp) anyway
SB
I know the episode but I cannot thnk of the name of it. Not unusual.
Oh well, I don't understand sylables (sp) anyway
SB
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Re: The Short SHORT version
Affliction?
Love is a verb.
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Chapter 17 of Word of Ice is up!
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/17/World-of-Ice
The Naked Truth and other necessities of life
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12056258/1 ... es-of-life
Re: The Short SHORT version
panyasan wrote:Affliction?
Re: The Short SHORT version
I hope I got it right with the syllables:
Hands shoved the food
into her mouth - her eyes
locked and ravenous
Hands shoved the food
into her mouth - her eyes
locked and ravenous
Love is a verb.
Chapter 17 of Word of Ice is up!
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/17/World-of-Ice
The Naked Truth and other necessities of life
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12056258/1 ... es-of-life
Chapter 17 of Word of Ice is up!
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/17/World-of-Ice
The Naked Truth and other necessities of life
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12056258/1 ... es-of-life
Re: The Short SHORT version
By my counting that's 4, 6, 5.
I think we've been short changed.
I think we've been short changed.
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Re: The Short SHORT version
Hands shovéd the food
into her mouth - her eyés
locked and ravenous
Try it now, Cogito.
Heh heh. My literature students call this cheating, but poets used to do it all the time.
into her mouth - her eyés
locked and ravenous
Try it now, Cogito.
Heh heh. My literature students call this cheating, but poets used to do it all the time.
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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Read opening chapters free at Amazon (US): The Awful Mess: A Love Story
Blog: Sheer Hubris Press / Twitter: @sheerhubris / Facebook: Sandra Hutchison
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Read opening chapters free at Amazon (US): The Awful Mess: A Love Story
Blog: Sheer Hubris Press / Twitter: @sheerhubris / Facebook: Sandra Hutchison
Re: The Short SHORT version
Well, now that it scans properly I can see at once that it's about Bounty.
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Your turn, and you KNOW we'll be counting those syllables!
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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Read opening chapters free at Amazon (US): The Awful Mess: A Love Story
Blog: Sheer Hubris Press / Twitter: @sheerhubris / Facebook: Sandra Hutchison
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Blog: Sheer Hubris Press / Twitter: @sheerhubris / Facebook: Sandra Hutchison
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