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Re: Doubts with a scene in "Harbinger"

Postby panyasan » Sun Nov 30, 2008 1:58 pm

Alelou wrote: On the other hand, if Amanda had dropped a robe and thrown herself on him instead of T'Pol, I bet he would have gone along. Really, it would have been the gentlemanly thing to do in that situation.

Poehh.. I am so glad Amanda handled him the flowers and did NOT dropped the robe! :D :lol:
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Re: Doubts with a scene in "Harbinger"

Postby Asso » Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:07 pm

Actually, you made me more attentive about Amanda, even if - honestly - I have to say I already wrote something regarding her, in my story "Destiny".
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Re: Doubts with a scene in "Harbinger"

Postby panyasan » Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:16 pm

Asso wrote:Actually, you made me more attentive about Amanda, even if - honestly - I have to say I already wrote something regarding her, in my story "Destiny".

For me, that's a hugh compliment. Thanks! :D
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Re: Doubts with a scene in "Harbinger"

Postby Dinah » Sun Nov 30, 2008 3:05 pm

I really enjoyed your story, panyasan. Using T'Pol's name when addressing Amanda, even when half asleep, is a BIG no-no. With her MACO training, Amanda could have probably put him on the deck and made him eat those roses. I think he got off lucky. :lol:

I would have to agree that, at this point, swearing off women would seem like the wisest course for Trip. Any time he's in the same room with Amanda, even if they're across the room from each other, he's probably going to get the Vulcan death stare from T'Pol. And Amanda is going to be looking daggers at him as well. I think staying with his engines is the best course of action for him. At least they aren't prone to jealousy.

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Re: Doubts with a scene in "Harbinger"

Postby panyasan » Sun Nov 30, 2008 8:21 pm

Dinah wrote:I would have to agree that, at this point, swearing off women would seem like the wisest course for Trip. Any time he's in the same room with Amanda, even if they're across the room from each other, he's probably going to get the Vulcan death stare from T'Pol. And Amanda is going to be looking daggers at him as well. I think staying with his engines is the best course of action for him. At least they aren't prone to jealousy.

Poor Trip, between a Vulcan death stare and Maco daggers. Now I really feel sorry for him.
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Re: Doubts with a scene in "Harbinger"

Postby Asso » Sun Nov 30, 2008 8:58 pm

panyasan wrote:
Dinah wrote:I would have to agree that, at this point, swearing off women would seem like the wisest course for Trip. Any time he's in the same room with Amanda, even if they're across the room from each other, he's probably going to get the Vulcan death stare from T'Pol. And Amanda is going to be looking daggers at him as well. I think staying with his engines is the best course of action for him. At least they aren't prone to jealousy.

Poor Trip, between a Vulcan death stare and Maco daggers. Now I really feel sorry for him.

Maybe. But, if I can expose a male point of view, honestly it should be very good to be the bone of contention between two so beautiful women. :D (Forgive me, T'Pol! :) )
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