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Living Beyond: My Story in Progress

Postby aeverett » Wed May 09, 2007 7:49 pm

Just found this board on this site. I'd like to post the link to my inprogress work 'Living Beyond'. I've posted it here as it has definite TnT subtext and focuses on the after affects of E2, for me the most annoying plothole in Season 3, Lorian.

So, if you want to read 'Living Beyond' come to:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3504453/1/

Feedback is not only encouraged, it's craved!

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Re: Living Beyond: My Story in Progress

Postby CX » Wed May 09, 2007 8:11 pm

Cool, I was actually considering starting my own thread here for this since I can't post at HoT anymore.

I think you're doing a really good job on it so far, and I like the characters that you've created. Smile I sort of thought this would be more AU as far as maybe bringing TnT together more since this take place prior to Trip taking off for Columbia, but I'll be interested in seeing how you squeeze this into canon (not counting *the_abomination* as canon).
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Re: Living Beyond: My Story in Progress

Postby Dinah » Thu May 10, 2007 12:04 am

I am enjoying your story very much. You've established some interesting characters. I do have to admit that I wish Trip and T'Pol were a little more involved in the story. I would think that Trip especially would want to get to know his granddaughters. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story.

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Re: Living Beyond: My Story in Progress

Postby blacknblue » Thu May 10, 2007 2:14 am

I like the latest chapter. You should submit this to TriS. You will get some good reader feedback. ff.net is turning into a trashcan, IMHO.

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Re: Living Beyond: My Story in Progress

Postby rogue » Thu May 10, 2007 3:24 am

Enjoyed the latest chapter and can't wait to see what you have coming up next. I hope to see more interaction between Trip and his granddaughters.

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Re: Living Beyond: My Story in Progress

Postby aeverett » Wed May 16, 2007 4:16 am

Some more chapters have been posted since last I posted here. Check them out!

And thanks for the feedback! Keep it coming!!!

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Re: Living Beyond: My Story in Progress

Postby aeverett » Thu May 24, 2007 6:49 am

Chapter 24 is up now. Enjoy and don't be skimpy on the feedback!


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