"Mirage" discussion thread
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:04 pm
I don't know if I'm allowed to do this or only Administrators have that privilege (eh, Honeybee?
) but since I put this story on the right track again (yay!) and I'm writing the next chapter, I've thought of doing a little survey to know what people is expecting. This is a thread where I can see if the universe I'm writing is being understood.
For example, is there any point of the story I didn't make clear or you have doubts about? (don't be shy to ask, if it's something I'll explain in following chapters I'll say so and keep the secret
)
More especifically: is something I didn't explain well enough or it's still confusing after apparently explaining it?
Would you want something to be explained because you think it's essential to the story? (this might be helpful since I know the entire story and I could overlook some important point that you, the readers, need to know.)
Is some character very OCC? Or the changes made in one character doesn't have explanation (or logic) enough? After I've read the reviews I've seen Linda asked about V'Lar and how she didn't see much of the RU V'Lar in her. Don't worry, Linda, there is an explanation.
My take in the development of the new universe is to do it little by little, am I doing a good job for now? Or it's still blurred and confusing?
My rule of putting three (at least) Chekhov guns in each chapter... Is it all right? Is it too much? It doesn't matter since you aren't even seeing them?
And last, but not least, about the relationship between Trip and T'Pol... Too slow? Too fast? Realistic? Or do you have to do a double axel of faith to swallow it?
Any answer and help is welcome guys![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/biggrin.gif)
![Wink ;-)](./images/smilies/wink.gif)
For example, is there any point of the story I didn't make clear or you have doubts about? (don't be shy to ask, if it's something I'll explain in following chapters I'll say so and keep the secret
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/lol.gif)
More especifically: is something I didn't explain well enough or it's still confusing after apparently explaining it?
Would you want something to be explained because you think it's essential to the story? (this might be helpful since I know the entire story and I could overlook some important point that you, the readers, need to know.)
Is some character very OCC? Or the changes made in one character doesn't have explanation (or logic) enough? After I've read the reviews I've seen Linda asked about V'Lar and how she didn't see much of the RU V'Lar in her. Don't worry, Linda, there is an explanation.
My take in the development of the new universe is to do it little by little, am I doing a good job for now? Or it's still blurred and confusing?
My rule of putting three (at least) Chekhov guns in each chapter... Is it all right? Is it too much? It doesn't matter since you aren't even seeing them?
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/smile.gif)
And last, but not least, about the relationship between Trip and T'Pol... Too slow? Too fast? Realistic? Or do you have to do a double axel of faith to swallow it?
Any answer and help is welcome guys
![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/biggrin.gif)