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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Feb 08, 2012 2:48 am

Kir'shara?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Kotik » Wed Feb 08, 2012 3:01 am

No 8)

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Feb 08, 2012 3:42 am

Are the "I" and the "he" T'Pol and Trip?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby panyasan » Wed Feb 08, 2012 5:12 am

First I thought "Similitude", then I thought "Harbinger". Is it ''Harbinger"?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Kotik » Wed Feb 08, 2012 10:59 am

Distracted wrote:Are the "I" and the "he" T'Pol and Trip?


No 8)

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Wed Feb 08, 2012 11:34 am

Kotik wrote:He is a good man
But I cannot show him now
I wish he will forgive


You've already ruled out my first few guesses.

Hmmm.

Could it be Daedelus?

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Kotik » Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:52 pm

No, it's not Daedalus. It's a bit tricky, I admit. It's generic enough to fit for so many episodes, so I'll offer a hint. It's a season 3 episode.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby panyasan » Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:23 pm

Similitude? Sim and Phlox or Sim and Jon?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:45 pm

The Forgotten? I'm thinking of Trip's attitude from Degra's perspective.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Kotik » Wed Feb 08, 2012 8:00 pm

No and No 8) Think of a man and a woman - it's the woman that did something in need of forgiving 8)

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Wed Feb 08, 2012 8:24 pm

Hmmm, series 3, woman not T'Pol needs forgiving ...

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Kotik » Wed Feb 08, 2012 8:33 pm

No 8)

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Wed Feb 08, 2012 9:06 pm

As long as this is taking so long, do you really mean, "I wish he would forgive"? Or do you mean, "I hope he will forgive"? The former suggests he knows and hasn't forgiven yet. The latter suggests he may not even know he needs to forgive yet, or knows and at this point could go either way about it.

(Grammatically, the construction you have right now -- "I wish he will forgive" -- doesn't really make sense in English.)
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Kotik » Wed Feb 08, 2012 10:13 pm

"I hope he will forgive" is the one that fits best. Guess I overestimate my language knowledge sometimes :? Sorry for the language snafu :(

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Wed Feb 08, 2012 10:58 pm

North Star?

Bethany hoping that MacCready will forgive her for hiding the truth about her mixed blood.


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