GUESS WHO HAIKU
Moderators: justTripn, Elessar, dark_rain
- Silverbullet
- Commodore
- Posts: 3507
- Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Casa Grande , Arizona
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Dis, you are right it is too abstract and vague. I will try another later on.Idnore this will edit it out.
Sb
Sb
I am Retired. Having a good time IS my job


-
- Site Donor
- Posts: 5036
- Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 1:19 am
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Lafayette, LA
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
*bump*
SB seems to have run out of ideas. I will step in to restart the game.
Command burdens me,
The expanse of duty calls,
And I am friendless
SB seems to have run out of ideas. I will step in to restart the game.
Command burdens me,
The expanse of duty calls,
And I am friendless

- Silverbullet
- Commodore
- Posts: 3507
- Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Casa Grande , Arizona
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Thanks, Dis. I have spent the day sarchingfor a users manual. It was not where I thought I had left it. Also a friend called and we talked for three hours. Had not spoken for a year. In addition I was correcting about a thousand mispellings in a story. Spell checker didn't get them all.
My guess: Archer
SB
My guess: Archer
SB
I am Retired. Having a good time IS my job


- Silverbullet
- Commodore
- Posts: 3507
- Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Casa Grande , Arizona
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
My Haidu:
So like her flower
The two of them in a bower
She blooms in her lover
So like her flower
The two of them in a bower
She blooms in her lover
I am Retired. Having a good time IS my job


-
- Site Donor
- Posts: 5036
- Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 1:19 am
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Lafayette, LA
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
You're right about Archer, of course. I'm not sure about all the flower imagery in yours, though. Doesn't sound much like T'Pol, even though I know she and Trip are the couple you like to write about. I can't honestly think of any woman aboard who's got anything to do with flowers and has a lover.

Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Wasn't Liz a botanist? Not sure I associate her with any flower in particular so I'm not sure what 'her flower' means. Did she marry Phlox in E2?
- Silverbullet
- Commodore
- Posts: 3507
- Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Casa Grande , Arizona
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Flower was imagry. He took her flower (virgiity) in their lovers Bower. So she blossoms as a woman in her lover.
Enough of a hint.
Sb
Enough of a hint.
Sb
I am Retired. Having a good time IS my job


Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
I'm not sure I really get that, but from the clue it surely has to be TnT.
- Silverbullet
- Commodore
- Posts: 3507
- Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Casa Grande , Arizona
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Cogito, yes, it is TnT more specifaclly T'Pol. You get to compose a Haiku too.
SB
SB
I am Retired. Having a good time IS my job


Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
It doesn't feel very Haiku-ey to me, but it has the right number of syllables:
I wish I was free.
Free to live, to love, to choose.
What would that be like?
I wish I was free.
Free to live, to love, to choose.
What would that be like?
- Silverbullet
- Commodore
- Posts: 3507
- Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Casa Grande , Arizona
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Yes, well done.
- Silverbullet
- Commodore
- Posts: 3507
- Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Casa Grande , Arizona
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
I was correct with Archer and now Cogenitor. so I owe a Haiku or two
SB
SB
I am Retired. Having a good time IS my job


- Silverbullet
- Commodore
- Posts: 3507
- Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Casa Grande , Arizona
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Who is the narrator
Alone am I, adrift
Where is it now I can call home
Where he is,it is
SB
Alone am I, adrift
Where is it now I can call home
Where he is,it is
SB
I am Retired. Having a good time IS my job


- enterprikayak
- Token Canadian
- Posts: 3324
- Joined: Tue Jun 05, 2007 10:40 pm
- Show On Map: No
- Location: Southwest Canada
- Contact:
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
T'Pol?

|||||||||enterpriseScrybe & enterpriseScrybe2 TrekVids||||||||| www.trekref.info|||||||||www.TriaxTpolitan.com|||||||||
"Let's be honest with ourselves: there's nothing easy about the life we've chosen. But we don't do it because it's easy, dammit!
We do it because the tits are big and the bat'leths are sharp and the ships are fast!"
Return to “Drabble Fanfiction”
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 10 guests