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Lovely!
I'm going to leave this one for someone else to play.
I'm going to leave this one for someone else to play.
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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You really shouldn't answer unless you plan to play, SB. Are you up to writing a haiku?

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Distracted wrote:Silken folds tumble
She glows, golden in the light
I forget to breathe
I'm too late to guess, but that's absolutely beautiful. This is the difference, in my opinion, between chunks of words that rhyme or have the right number of syllables, and true poetry.
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Here with grat help from distracted is a Haibu I owe:
"Extended her hand
Denied him her broken Heart
Mourned her bitter loss."
Have at it.
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"Extended her hand
Denied him her broken Heart
Mourned her bitter loss."
Have at it.
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I can't guess. I already knew the answer before SB posted since he had me beta it, but this one's very poignant.

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Terra Prime?
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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Alelou, nope. sounds like it could be though
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I'd like to point out that there's no rule against doing an episode that's already been done. Not to be giving hints or anything, but... 


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Daedalus?
Love is a verb.
Chapter 18 of Word of Ice is up!
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/18/World-of-Ice
The Naked Truth and other necessities of life
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12056258/1 ... es-of-life
Chapter 18 of Word of Ice is up!
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/18/World-of-Ice
The Naked Truth and other necessities of life
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12056258/1 ... es-of-life
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The question you might want to ask yourself is exactly who is "him"? It may not be who you think.
*walks off innocently whistling... not giving any hints at all*
*walks off innocently whistling... not giving any hints at all*

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Silverbullet wrote:
"Extended her hand
Denied him her broken Heart
Mourned her bitter loss."
I'm still puzzling to think of a pairing and episode that included all three elements. I will get there eventually!
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Home?
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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You are correct alelou, you are up.
T'Pol extended her hand with two fingers held out to touch the fingers of Koss
She witheld her broken heart from him (Koss)
She mourned her bitter loss of Trip.
SB
T'Pol extended her hand with two fingers held out to touch the fingers of Koss
She witheld her broken heart from him (Koss)
She mourned her bitter loss of Trip.
SB
I am Retired. Having a good time IS my job


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