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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:29 pm

Lovely!

I'm going to leave this one for someone else to play.
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:47 pm

Harbinger

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:53 pm

You really shouldn't answer unless you plan to play, SB. Are you up to writing a haiku?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Sat Feb 11, 2012 11:17 pm

Distracted wrote:Silken folds tumble
She glows, golden in the light
I forget to breathe


I'm too late to guess, but that's absolutely beautiful. This is the difference, in my opinion, between chunks of words that rhyme or have the right number of syllables, and true poetry.
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Sat Feb 11, 2012 11:46 pm

Thanks, Cogito. :kiss:
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:23 am

Here with grat help from distracted is a Haibu I owe:

"Extended her hand
Denied him her broken Heart
Mourned her bitter loss."

Have at it.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Tue Feb 14, 2012 4:26 am

I can't guess. I already knew the answer before SB posted since he had me beta it, but this one's very poignant.
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Wed Feb 15, 2012 4:32 pm

Terra Prime?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Wed Feb 15, 2012 4:47 pm

Alelou, nope. sounds like it could be though

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Feb 15, 2012 5:28 pm

I'd like to point out that there's no rule against doing an episode that's already been done. Not to be giving hints or anything, but... :roll:
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby panyasan » Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:31 pm

Daedalus?
Love is a verb.

Chapter 18 of Word of Ice is up!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/18/World-of-Ice

The Naked Truth and other necessities of life

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12056258/1 ... es-of-life

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:36 pm

The question you might want to ask yourself is exactly who is "him"? It may not be who you think.

*walks off innocently whistling... not giving any hints at all*
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:47 pm

Silverbullet wrote:
"Extended her hand
Denied him her broken Heart
Mourned her bitter loss."



I'm still puzzling to think of a pairing and episode that included all three elements. I will get there eventually!

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Thu Feb 16, 2012 2:19 am

Home?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Feb 16, 2012 2:34 am

You are correct alelou, you are up.

T'Pol extended her hand with two fingers held out to touch the fingers of Koss
She witheld her broken heart from him (Koss)
She mourned her bitter loss of Trip.

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