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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:13 am

Have to think.

Will come up with something tomorrow

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:12 pm

My Haiku



A Haiku

Another chosen
A very friendly gesture
stunned dissappointment

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:02 am

Are you doing Home again?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Sun Feb 19, 2012 2:02 pm

Nope.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Sun Feb 19, 2012 2:55 pm

Damn, and I thought I knew it and was just being nice by not saying!
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Sun Feb 19, 2012 3:41 pm

Was it Harbinger where Trip did neuropressure on Amanda and she slapped his butt during a training exercise?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Sun Feb 19, 2012 3:46 pm

Dis, yes ou are right:

When told to take a partner Trip was next to t'Pol but he walked over to amanda and chose her.
She slapped him on the butt as a friendly gesture

T'Pol was Tunned because Trip did not object to the slap but seemed to like it

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:00 pm

Heh. T'Pol's reaction in that scene struck me as more royally pissed off than disappointed, but everyone's entitled to their own interpretation.

Maybe this one will be a little harder to guess. Probably not. My thought processes tend toward the straightforward and obvious.


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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:33 pm

"Twilight"?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:51 pm

You got it. :thumbsup:

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:37 pm

Okey dokey:

Wreckage below them
a bitter discovery:
Friendship forged in grief.
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:39 am

Sleeping Dogs, maybe?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:24 am

No, but I guess it works for that one too. I think this particular friendship is a little stronger, though...

Might be a repeat episode. (I didn't review them all.)
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby lfvoy » Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:10 am

Alelou wrote:No, but I guess it works for that one too. I think this particular friendship is a little stronger, though...

Might be a repeat episode. (I didn't review them all.)


Repeats are allowed! And I think this one is a repeat since jT also wrote a nifty little "Shuttlepod One" haiku that stumped us all too. :)

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:59 am

Yes! You're up!
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