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Have to think.
Will come up with something tomorrow
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Will come up with something tomorrow
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My Haiku
A Haiku
Another chosen
A very friendly gesture
stunned dissappointment
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A Haiku
Another chosen
A very friendly gesture
stunned dissappointment
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Damn, and I thought I knew it and was just being nice by not saying!
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Was it Harbinger where Trip did neuropressure on Amanda and she slapped his butt during a training exercise?

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Dis, yes ou are right:
When told to take a partner Trip was next to t'Pol but he walked over to amanda and chose her.
She slapped him on the butt as a friendly gesture
T'Pol was Tunned because Trip did not object to the slap but seemed to like it
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When told to take a partner Trip was next to t'Pol but he walked over to amanda and chose her.
She slapped him on the butt as a friendly gesture
T'Pol was Tunned because Trip did not object to the slap but seemed to like it
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Heh. T'Pol's reaction in that scene struck me as more royally pissed off than disappointed, but everyone's entitled to their own interpretation.
Maybe this one will be a little harder to guess. Probably not. My thought processes tend toward the straightforward and obvious.
Fragile memories
Renewed in grief each morning
But night grants surcease
Maybe this one will be a little harder to guess. Probably not. My thought processes tend toward the straightforward and obvious.
Fragile memories
Renewed in grief each morning
But night grants surcease

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"Twilight"?
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Okey dokey:
Wreckage below them
a bitter discovery:
Friendship forged in grief.
Wreckage below them
a bitter discovery:
Friendship forged in grief.
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No, but I guess it works for that one too. I think this particular friendship is a little stronger, though...
Might be a repeat episode. (I didn't review them all.)
Might be a repeat episode. (I didn't review them all.)
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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Alelou wrote:No, but I guess it works for that one too. I think this particular friendship is a little stronger, though...
Might be a repeat episode. (I didn't review them all.)
Repeats are allowed! And I think this one is a repeat since jT also wrote a nifty little "Shuttlepod One" haiku that stumped us all too.

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Yes! You're up!
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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Read opening chapters free at Amazon (US): The Awful Mess: A Love Story
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