GUESS WHO HAIKU

[Silverbullet]

Who is narrator

Support she sees
To help her to be free
To be together

SB

[Silverbullet]

EK, right on the first Drabble it is T'Pol

SB

[Cogito]

Haikus of 5 syllables/ 7 syllables/ 5 syllables!

Perhaps I'm not counting properly, but it doesn't look to me as if those last two from SB are following the '5, 7, 5' rule.

[Silverbullet]

Slap my wrist hard. Sorry, early morning and not awake. Knew I owed two, so.....

Your guess?

SB

[Cogito]

Well, I reckon the first one is T'Pol, but EK already beat me to that.

As for the second one, no idea. I guess it's about T'Pol, and the narrator realises that (presumably) T'Pol has found some support, but who/what that support is and who the narrator is I'm afraid I can't fathom.

[Silverbullet]

One that easy? You are joking, of course.

I will rewrite it

My support she sees
for me to help her to be free
for us to be together

SB

[Distracted]

Still too vague for me. And it's supposed to be 5-7-5 syllables, not words.

But if I were to guess, I'd say... Princess Fishstick maybe? Wasn't she trapped in something and Trip freed her? I'm stumped.

[Cogito]

It would be out of character for you to pick these two to write about, but I guess you could be writing about Trip helping T'Pol escape from the coldly logical life that her culture had planned for her, for a life with him instead.

[Silverbullet]

Cogito, right you are. It is Trip. thought that a T'Pol and Trip Kaikuu would be fun.

SB