"Guess Who" Drabble Challenge
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Episode: Fusion?
Narrator:Vulcan (Kov) on the "alternative Vulcan ship" who would not call his sick father?
Friend: Then Trip told him about the emotion "regret"?
Narrator:Vulcan (Kov) on the "alternative Vulcan ship" who would not call his sick father?
Friend: Then Trip told him about the emotion "regret"?
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Some of these people haven't taken their medication. Let's see what happens now...
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
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May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
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May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
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Alright!
I’ll be right back at ya!


I’ll be right back at ya!

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Anger: Not everything Commander! Stop pulling me! Stop taunting me! Let this go!
Frustration: He is too open, without hesitation. Waiting, welcoming, wanting. Does he not know how impossible this is? How difficult? It would overwhelm me!
Fear: Yet I do feel him. The undisciplined vibration that grows stronger, bolder, not controlled. How did he know?
Stubbornness: He must not know this is true! To want this, to want him, is not logical. Where IS my logic? I must keep disciplined thoughts, focused on the mission. I have to maintain control.
Hope: Could it happen? Could this be? An escape?
Narrator, episode, and what comment(s) brought this on?
Frustration: He is too open, without hesitation. Waiting, welcoming, wanting. Does he not know how impossible this is? How difficult? It would overwhelm me!
Fear: Yet I do feel him. The undisciplined vibration that grows stronger, bolder, not controlled. How did he know?
Stubbornness: He must not know this is true! To want this, to want him, is not logical. Where IS my logic? I must keep disciplined thoughts, focused on the mission. I have to maintain control.
Hope: Could it happen? Could this be? An escape?
Narrator, episode, and what comment(s) brought this on?
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Drat! You go for the Jugular don't you? Okay, I've got macaroons, potatoe chips, give me a while to think this through.
Some of these people haven't taken their medication. Let's see what happens now...
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
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Just when I think I have it... 

Some of these people haven't taken their medication. Let's see what happens now...
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
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The comment is the key – resulting in a cascade of pent up emotions 

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It's the episode that's giving me grief. I think it's E2, but the "escape" part doesn't fit.
Some of these people haven't taken their medication. Let's see what happens now...
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
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You know, a vacation can be considered an escape - an outlet to be yourself, to unwind, to let your guard down and indulge




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I have spent the last 2 days making 14 facebook ads for our denture office.
Talk about a drabble!!!! 135 characters allowed TOTAL including spaces. It's like a puzzle trying to get the clever msg in and the phone # and all.
Fun part is you make as many ads as you want and then only pay per click, so you can really see which ones are working and getting clicked on.
Not doing too bad in the click thru dept...my best performing ad has a headshot of an old smiling lady in a bathing suit and a pink flowery bathing cap and it says "Getting your teeth done right, so you can get on with the fun things in life. Call for an appointment today." With the phone number, etc. It's targeted at women who are 55+ and live in our town only. I'm gettin' all these clicks! Yay me!
Talk about a drabble!!!! 135 characters allowed TOTAL including spaces. It's like a puzzle trying to get the clever msg in and the phone # and all.
Fun part is you make as many ads as you want and then only pay per click, so you can really see which ones are working and getting clicked on.
Not doing too bad in the click thru dept...my best performing ad has a headshot of an old smiling lady in a bathing suit and a pink flowery bathing cap and it says "Getting your teeth done right, so you can get on with the fun things in life. Call for an appointment today." With the phone number, etc. It's targeted at women who are 55+ and live in our town only. I'm gettin' all these clicks! Yay me!

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Okay Alison if you can drive me stark raving bonkers with a drabble you would make a heck of a fic! Ok it's not Two Days Two Nights it's not Fallen Hero it isn't Home... I looked through the transcripts. Good Golly I give up! Someone else guess. Dis HELP!
Some of these people haven't taken their medication. Let's see what happens now...
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
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WarpGirl wrote:It's the episode that's giving me grief. I think it's E2, but the "escape" part doesn't fit.
You pretty much guessed it - so I say you're up!
Narrator: T'Pol
Episode: E2. Trip tells her "you're afraid to admit that under the right circumstances you could have feelings for me, maybe you have them already" and "you know all the other women on board must have been taken, because I can't think of another reason why I'd marry someone as stubborn as you". Trip then has a little hisssy fit and walks out, with much attitude, telling her "You, seem to have everything, under control". He just can't have a sexual relationship without getting emotionally involved. This is why I love him!
Later Older T'Pol tells her that Trip could be an outlet for the emotions stirred in her (via Trellium D and OMT).
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So when are you going to post a full story?
It's 2:30 AM so I refuse to think up another drabble right now. The Boys will just have to wait until later after a few hours sleep and a smoothie for breakfast. Hey men you cannot take my turn got it?

Some of these people haven't taken their medication. Let's see what happens now...
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
Donna Moss: The West Wing
And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
Fics
May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us
*Rights,* Wrongs, and Choices
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Sleep sounds real good. Bonne nuit!
Re: "Guess Who" Drabble Challenge
AllisonPetra wrote:Anger: Not everything Commander! Stop pulling me! Stop taunting me! Let this go!
Frustration: He is too open, without hesitation. Waiting, welcoming, wanting. Does he not know how impossible this is? How difficult? It would overwhelm me!
Fear: Yet I do feel him. The undisciplined vibration that grows stronger, bolder, not controlled. How did he know?
Stubbornness: He must not know this is true! To want this, to want him, is not logical. Where IS my logic? I must keep disciplined thoughts, focused on the mission. I have to maintain control.
Hope: Could it happen? Could this be? An escape?
Narrator, episode, and what comment(s) brought this on?
I'm miles too late, of course. I am reasonably sure that it is T'Pol thinking about Trip. I liked the sequence of emotions: Anger, frustration, fear, stubbornness, and finally hope.
For me, the "Not everything" brings to mind Trip's comment that she seems to have everything under control. But I struggled to remember which episode he said this line in. What's this about reading transcripts, WarpGirl? Next you'll be saying you have a full list of episodes and characters in front of you too. No wonder you're so good at this.

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