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"Endgame"

Postby CX » Wed May 09, 2007 8:24 pm

So, can someone who's a VOY fan explain to me what's so horrible about this episode? Confused
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby CoffeeCat » Wed May 09, 2007 8:48 pm

I tend to agree with Michelle Green's take on it - I don't agree with her about every detail, but she really had a good rant going when she reviewed it. The source is here.

Here's her review:

So Janeway fulfills the promise she made to get her crew home in "Caretaker," the way she said she would in "The Q and the Grey" -- by perseverance, hard work and faith. Then she decides that's not good enough, and violates everything sacred to a Starfleet officer in order to find a shortcut. Imagine if Kirk decided that the lives of "his people" -- Spock in The Wrath of Khan, or his nephew in "Operation: Annihilate!" or Edith Keeler in "City on the Edge of Forever" -- took precedent over the best interests of Earth and the Federation. Imagine if Sisko had decided to stay in the alternate universe because his love for Jennifer mattered more to him than Earth or Bajor. Imagine if Picard had brought a Borg invasion fleet to Earth because he didn't want to risk the lives of his Enterprise crewmembers.

Captain Janeway has fulfilled the destiny she found in the Delta Quadrant. She has become Annorax, the crazed time traveler from "The Year of Hell" who rewrites galactic history to save his beloved. For what it's worth, Janeway succeeds on her first try, but it doesn't change the appalling significance of her actions. Had she failed -- had she been assimilated with knowledge from the future, and sent a Borg sphere to Earth in the process -- she could have been responsible for the deaths of billions. It's ironic that although she changes the timeline to save Seven of Nine, "Endgame" proves that Voyager can survive without Seven. They get home. They make scientific advances without Seven's Borg know-how. They lose only a couple of crewmembers a year -- not at all a bad record for a Starfleet vessel, if Kirk's and Picard's records are any indication. Yet it's not good enough for Janeway, who worries more about the personal happiness of a few close friends than the future of everyone in the Alpha Quadrant. Kathryn Janeway is unworthy of the uniform she wears. Star Trek's first female captain has ended her run by using theft, coercion and cheating, going so far as to risk destroying Earth to give herself a second chance.

It's clear when Paris says that he's already home and when Kim toasts the journey that Voyager and its captain have their complete loyalty, a loyalty that extends far into the future. But does Admiral Janeway have their best interests at heart? No matter her protestations of selfless nobility, she doesn't violate the Temporal Prime Directive to protect her "family," most of whom will survive and thrive -- Kim will make captain, the Doc will find love, Naomi Wildman will have a daughter, Paris and Torres will share an enduring marriage. She doesn't do it to save Seven or Tuvok, both of whom urge her not to make decisions affecting the entire crew based on their personal fates. She doesn't do it as an act of kindness for Chakotay, who -- based on his comments about maintaining the timeline in "Shattered" -- might very well have tried to talk her out of it (though he did something similar himself in "Timeless," from which "Endgame" seems partly regurgitated). Chakotay has rarely put his personal desires ahead of his sense of responsibility to others, not since "Dreadnought" when Janeway insisted that he leave her to die on the ship. He survived the loss of his family to the Cardassians and the loss of the Maquis in the war. It's hard to believe the loss of Seven would devastate him so thoroughly as to make his life meaningless.

Janeway doesn't violate the Temporal Prime Directive for "her crew," despite what she says. Otherwise she could have found a way to travel further back, to save the lives of Carey, Ballard, Jetal, Caplan, Hogan, Bandera, Durst, Stadi, Cavit, Voyager's original doctor and nurse -- even Seska, Jonas and Suder -- and all the other "family members" lost on the journey. She certainly doesn't do it to save the Federation from the Borg menace, or she'd have gone back before Locutus and saved the ever-increasing number of Starfleet officers lost at Wolf 359. Voyager's long journey home apparently has led to the development of technology to defend against the Borg; with that timeline eradicated, the Federation might be vulnerable again. Janeway makes her choice because she personally finds the loss of her favorite crewmembers intolerable. In the end, this isn't about what's best for the crew or Voyager or Starfleet or Earth or the galaxy: it's about what's best for Kathryn Janeway. Captain Ahab, meet Admiral Nemo.

The improbable affair between Chakotay and Seven is necessary to suggest that no matter how selfish Janeway's desire to change the past, it's not because she seeks the happy destiny of ordinary mortals. She tells the Doctor she has no interest in marriage, and is apparently content to play the maiden aunt to the children of others. Still, the writers must eradicate the possibility that she plans a joyful intimate relationship with either Chakotay or Seven when she reaches the Alpha Quadrant in the altered timeline, because that would constitute an inarguably selfish motive for wanting to get home...and at this point they need to counter "The Voyager Conspiracy" evidence that Janeway has intimate feelings for Seven just as much as they need to destroy the "Resolutions" of her attraction to Chakotay. So they cobble together a liaison between Chakotay and Seven that I hesitate to call a romance because it's so forced. If we had gotten any insight into the characters -- some inkling that she's felt connected to him since he first called her "Annika" when he broke her link to the Collective, or that the reason he's been so distant from her is because he finds her so attractive he was afraid it would compromise his work and his relationship with Janeway, as seems probable by his offer to change the duty roster for Seven -- then I might have found the relationship at least slightly plausible, if not a desirable development.

Instead, Seven makes a sudden, unexplained decision to alter her cortical node, which she refused to do a few weeks earlier in "Human Error" for emotional reasons that resurface again here. She dismisses the Doctor's love for her without a second thought or a kind word. Apparently Seven's conception of romance does not include the sharing of feelings or intimate conversations; instead she plays the traditional role of courtier, suggesting dates, bringing flowers, planting aggressive kisses on the object of her desire. When she tries to end the experiment, Chakotay points out that she doesn't really know who he is if she thinks he would give up on a relationship out of fear. As viewers, we're supposed to accept this shallow affair as the great love of their lives. Yet the incident can't diminish the fact that for the past several seasons, both Chakotay and Seven have cared about Janeway far more than they cared about one another. One could easily make the case that unrequited adoration of their captain is the main thing they have in common. The writers would have been much better off acknowledging the complicated relationships Janeway has with both crewmembers, rather than trying to bury them under this flimsy cliche of a romance plot. Perhaps, having already given Seven the run of the ship, the bulk of the character development, the highest status on the show, they still feel the woman wouldn't really, truly be complete without also giving her the man she wants.

The older Janeway isn't a woman at all to these writers, so these final steps to desexualize her hardly come as a surprise. Since Barbie of Borg came on board, Voyager has really had two goals: to get home, but also to explore Seven's humanity. While the legitimate female authority on Voyager descended into erratic behavior -- sometimes putting on displays of incompetence from which Seven had to save her, sometimes becoming so focused on her role as mother to the crew that she forgot her responsibilities as captain -- Seven alternated between feeling sorry for herself because the Borg robbed her of a childhood and feeling vastly superior to the others because the Borg made her so superior to them. In "Human Error" she feared she could never become fully human, her one point of inferiority. If only we had gotten so lucky -- we saw enough attempts at humanization on Next Gen with Data, and he was far more likeable than Seven.

But borrowing from The Next Generation is one of the few things Voyager actually does well. Here we get a rehash of Borg themes that stretch back to "The Best of Both Worlds," though the villains have been housebroken and defanged -- how many times can we watch them succumb to pathogens while their Queens die without starting to get cynical about their power? Still, we get lots and lots of Borg, as if sheer numbers will make up for complexity. We get Klingons. We get Starfleet's finest ships sailing off into battle. As in TNG's "All Good Things," we get a crewmember dying of a degenerative disease, a dead lover causing angst for the first officer, a crewmember of lower rank making captain. We also get time travel, which seems about as complicated on Voyager as flossing teeth, though no one seems to spend much time worrying seriously about the consequences of actions like the sort Janeway indulges in "Endgame" -- one almost longs for the odious Section 31 to step in and stop her.

For fans of the superficial tropes of the Trek franchise, there's a feast for the eyes. The special effects have only improved over time, the makeup's fine as always despite some bizarre appearances among the aged characters. Janeway's shuttle looks very cool morphing into the Batmobile, and Voyager looks really impressive morphing into the Viper. But who chooses a sci-fi show to watch based on its technical Emmy nominations? The performances try to redeem the material, but inevitably they fall short. Everyone either seems to be trying too hard or not trying at all.

Kate Mulgrew does superb work here, comparable to Robert Picardo's acting with himself in "Life Line." One actually believes that there are two of her: the perky grand dame and the self-righteous younger version. It's great fun to watch the Janeways interact, generating even more fireworks than in second season's "Deadlock." But now both Janeways seem overly earnest; they lack the fundamental joie de vivre that characterized the captain early on in the voyage. Thus it gets tiring to watch them. They're both fanatics, and even though the younger Janeway finally makes the token gesture of consulting her crew before a big decision, she's made sure to stack the deck in her favor by playing off her older self. I've been frustrated before when Janeway has chosen to put the life of a single member of Species 8472 over the needs of her crew, but in this case the younger Janeway is right to consider the destruction of a Borg conduit heading to Earth far more important than the lives of 150 Starfleet officers. Yet the story starts out from the perspective of the future Janeway, so she's the one we're encouraged to root for.

Mulgrew plays the admiral with more authority than the captain, which ultimately backfires because it's impossible to root for a character written as such a self-righteous person -- even if it is pleasant that she rather than Seven of Nine gets the last word with both the crew and the Borg Queen. As Richard Whettestone writes in his hilarious and clever review, we don't see the events that shape Admiral Janeway's mindset. We don't see her lose Seven and Chakotay, so we can't witness her grief. Mulgrew's acerbic, powerful professionalism as the older Janeway don't draw us in to the depth of her feeling for her crew; we barely get a visible reaction from her as she mentions the tragedies that shape the future. It's impossible to feel her pain because we never even see it; instead we see a strong, witty woman who can crack jokes at Chakotay's graveside. Why show us so many people living happily in the intolerable future Admiral Janeway wants to change, if we don't even get insight into the pain and suffering that compel her to change it?

Jeri Ryan seems to be playing a brand new Seven, who at least has the grace to frown disapprovingly when Chakotay suggests acting unprofessional on dates. But all the smirking and sashaying around the rest of the time don't make Seven seem more human, just more obnoxious. Must she make love seem like a conquest, and doesn't she have anything intelligent to contribute to the temporal plans at this all-important juncture, after dominating ship's science for the last four years? One wonders how an ex-drone doesn't know of the transwarp conduit in the nebula. Perhaps she's too distracted by sex to care about fulfilling her mentor's goal of getting to the Alpha Quadrant. This episode doesn't give any illustrations of what selfish Janeway sees in self-important Seven, which makes the admiral's actions seem all the more illogical.

Robert Beltran's Chakotay finishes the series as the same blank slate he started out; I still don't know what's important to this character, nor even whom he left at home when he started out. It's not hard to figure out what Chakotay sees in Seven, but that just adds to his image as a fundamentally superficial being, and Beltran's smarmy flirtation doesn't improve the situation. Garrett Wang and Tim Russ have both always done fine jobs when actually called upon to act, and "Endgame" is no exception. Russ gets to have more fun, though one wonders a bit what it means when the actor playing the Vulcan gives his most convincing performances when that Vulcan is not behaving in a logical manner, since most of Russ' best episodes are out-of-character stories like "Meld." Wang gives the sort of solid, steady, mature performance for which he will never be remembered because godawful Kim episodes like "Native Son" and "The Disease" wipe out all memory of "Emanations" or "The Chute." It's no surprise that the speech which should have been the theme of Voyager, about the journey being more exciting than the destination, gets given to mostly-forgettable Harry Kim.

Paris and Torres have their baby, an event I feel about the way I feel about the sweet little Mulder/Scully nuclear family bonding in The X-Files' season finale "Existence." I'm glad the writers didn't throw in some horrible twist like stillbirth just to spite the fans, but the relationship and pregnancy storylines have been so poorly dramatized that I'm incapable of enjoying the happy event. It figures that Paris demonstrates the sort of professionalism that eludes Janeway -- despite his own feelings, he leaves Torres in labor to go fly the ship. Tom has truly grown up, and become the sort of officer one only wishes Janeway appreciated more. Torres has been fully relegated to a maternal role by "Endgame" so it's hard to remember that she was once an engineer, but I rather like her future as a Klingon liaison -- if only she were destined to live that life rather than the one Admiral Janeway decides would be better for all of them. None of this is the fault of Robert Duncan McNeill or Roxann Dawson, whose performances never show the strain of playing underdeveloped characters. Unlike Beltran, who looks vacant-eyed in many scenes, the younger actors inhabit their characters. There's just not much there to give life.

Robert Picardo once more gets stuck playing a witty spin on a character who alternates between being the show's moral conscience and its comic relief. In "Endgame" there's no issue of holographic rights, for his ageless character has a respectable job, a frivolous young bride and an even more frivolous name. I'm happy about that, silly as it is; I couldn't stand for the Doctor, too, to be pining over Seven. Jim Wright of Delta Blues has suggested to me that the Doc is with Lana because the young blonde reminds him of Seven, but I disagree. I think he's with Lana because middle-aged men are supposed to want young blondes on their arms, like Beltran and Picardo get in this episode. It doesn't matter much whether the blondes are rocket scientists like Seven or space cadets like Lana. So it's not that Lana is Doc's substitute for Seven -- it's that any dazzling doll will do, and Seven might even be too old for the Doc 33 years hence.

I suppose I should say something about the lack of resolution to Voyager, which is canonically consistent but still frustrating. As in other Voyager episodes from "Time and Again" to "Year of Hell" to "Relativity," the writers waste most of their time creating an alternate history before rushing to a reset-button conclusion. I suppose the optimists among us can believe that perhaps Captain Janeway will change, now that she's home. Maybe she'll regain her old spirit and confidence, maybe she'll remember what she once loved about being a Starfleet officer. Maybe Chakotay will remember that he once honored his past and his traditions. Maybe Seven of Nine will explore her brave new world of romantic possibilities and run off with a television producer. I wish I cared. I wish I still believed in these characters, their lives and their emotions. I wish I still thought of them as role models or at least as real people I'd want to meet.

Here is the moral of "Endgame," in case all those young males in the demographic audience are paying attention to something beyond the explosions, the Borg Queen's corset and Seven's breasts. Forget the lessons of "City on the Edge of Forever," forget the lessons of The Wrath of Khan, forget the lessons of First Contact -- your own happiness is all that matters, not the needs of the many, not the continuity of time. Forget the sacrifices made during the Dominion War, forget the suffering of the Bajorans during the Occupation, forget that the old enemy Klingons are now Federation allies -- those are things that could have been changed before they started, so they are meaningless. Forget the journey that is life, the necessary losses, the way sometimes sorrow leads to happiness later. Instead, seize the moment when you can, no matter who may pay later. Think of exploration only as a means to an end, and when you don't like what you find, change destiny. If something goes wrong in your own life or the lives of your closest friends, it's fine to destroy the lives of everyone else around you to try to fix it, because the end justifies the means.

This "Endgame" is forfeit. It's full of sound and fury, signifying nothing. But it fits, because practically since the beginning, Star Trek Voyager has not been about people making tough decisions for the greater good. It's been about people whose overriding issues are selfish -- can we get home, can we save our friends from the Alien Peril of the Week, can we make our retro holodeck programs so interesting that they excuse us from not stopping to learn and teach as we head through an unknown region of our galaxy. There's no yearning for exploration, no willingness to sacrifice for the greater good. Voyager is not real Star Trek.


In other words - the dissapointment had been building up over time.

Personally - I think the bad choice that ruined the whole series was the addition of Seven of Nine. You figure, by season three, the writers were finally figuring out who their characters were (It always baffled me why Trek writers take this long) and they just totally smacked them all back down with the addition of a Mary Sue.

To me, Endgame represented everything that was bad about the series: It was a borgified version of "All Good Things". It represented writers who were trying to relive their glory days from ST:TNG at the expense of their characters.
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby CX » Wed May 09, 2007 9:25 pm

I guess I can kinda see what she's talking about, but like she says at the end there, the whole series is pretty much like that. Image
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby CoffeeCat » Wed May 09, 2007 9:38 pm

Exactly.
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby TPoptarts » Wed May 09, 2007 9:49 pm

I didn't think Endgame sucked that bad actually... but that's probably because I barely saw any VOY episodes Confused
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby JadziaKathryn » Wed May 09, 2007 9:56 pm

The C/7 relationship was so contrived, it drove me nuts.

But moreover, I think that they couldn't do this in the time they had. We only got a background explanation for what drove Admiral Janeway to become everything she once despised. If we'd seen a believable progression, it could've worked. Could've, if done well. Perhaps Brannon Braga was too busy oogling Jeri Ryan to come up with a better storyline.

Still, I never thought about all of this until I read the review. *shrug*
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby blacknblue » Wed May 09, 2007 9:57 pm

VOY never really did anything for me. For that matter, none of them since TOS did much. DS( was the best of the post TOS series until ENT came along. And the only thing that redeemed ENT in my eyes was the quality of the acting. Overall, the Star Trek franchise has been poorly served over the last twenty years.

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Re: "Endgame"

Postby CoffeeCat » Wed May 09, 2007 10:20 pm

Gak! You had to get me started on Voyager Very Happy I got a dang list.

1) They should have never wrote off Kes, and if they absolutely had to, they never should have added anyone in her place and never wrote "Fury". They could barely handle the rest of the crew.

2) They should have handled Paris and Torres better. Talk about a missed opportunity, sheesh. Roxanne was pregnant in the 4th season - I kinda wanted to see how the crew would have handled *that* storyline (things happening a little too soon? - Voyager going generational?) Instead we get the season seven P/T nuclear family complete with the freakin' TV dinners.

3) I wanted to believe they were really lost. Every week the dang ship looked like it was fresh out of spacedock. Please, someone tell me they didn't have a bunch of shuttle seeds that they just poured water on to grow new shuttle craft.

4) Why wasn't Paris studying to be a full fledged CMO? Don't they know what the word "Proactive" means?

5) Reset endings should have been forbidden.

6) They should have brought the ship home at the beginning of season seven and showed everyone dealing with the consequenses on their actions in the Delta Quadrant and also all the unresolved issues thay brought with them into the Delta Quadrant.

I didn't want to see Janeway promoted. I wanted to see her repremanded for adding maquis traitors to her crew. I wanted to see how she dealt with it.
I wanted to see how Tom Paris dealt with his high strung father.
I wanted to see Tuvok reunited with T'pel
I wanted to see how Harry Kim and Libby worked out (did they get back together? Did Libby find someone else?)
I wanted to see how the Doctor adjusted to the possibility of being turned off permanently.

The list just goes on and on...

PS. I didn't give a crap what happened to Seven of Nine.

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Re: "Endgame"

Postby JadziaKathryn » Wed May 09, 2007 10:28 pm

CoffeeCat wrote:I didn't want to see Janeway promoted. I wanted to see her repremanded for adding maquis traitors to her crew. I wanted to see how she dealt with it.

That, at least, I found believeable, unlike the seemingly endless supply of shuttles (now, if they'd handled them all like the built-from-scratch Delta Flyer, that would've been different). I can absolutely see that, because she's a hero, it would be PR suicide for Starfleet to reprimand her. On the other hand, if she's at HQ they can keep an eye on her. *shrug* That may not be militarily accurate - ask Rigil, Elessar or CX for that aspect - but I find it reasonable.
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby blacknblue » Wed May 09, 2007 10:34 pm

I suppose, since they kept making references to their replicators, and the fact that they were able to equip their Klingon refugees with everythign they needed to set up a new colony, that they had access to the resources to manufacture replacement parts for the shuttles on the fly.

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Re: "Endgame"

Postby CoffeeCat » Wed May 09, 2007 10:47 pm

^^ After watching ST:TNG I think they were more military than Voyager led us to believe. Maybe you're right about Janeway though as far as the politics of the situation were concerned. But as far as her earning her promotion I think it's debatable.

^ makes for some boring storytelling though... The first rule of writing "show: don't tell" - my original point was that Voyager didn't have the feel of being stranded. After a while it became predictable. "Oh look, the ship looks like shit this week - must be a reset ending!"
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby blacknblue » Wed May 09, 2007 10:50 pm

They were trying to redo TNG but with new aliens.

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Re: "Endgame"

Postby CoffeeCat » Wed May 09, 2007 11:14 pm

I was about to say "I rest my case"

But now that you mention the so called 'differant' aliens of ST: Voyager. Naa. They weren't differant. They slap a lump of clay on their forehead and "voila" instant Star Trek alien. They must have a replicator hidden somewhere for those as well. Or maybe they're actually a nasty side effect of replicating shuttle craft that no one talks about. When Torres leaves the room and the lights go out: the replicator spits out an alien as it powers down...
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby Kevin Thomas Riley » Wed May 09, 2007 11:18 pm

I never really cared enough abot VOY to get worked up about a crap finale. In my mind VOY didn't fail with Endgame. It failed long, long before that when it never took advantage of its premise. Well, that and showing what a stupid captain Janeway was. Kirk would've figured out a way to save the Ocampa and get back to the alpha quadrant without even breaking a sweat.
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Re: "Endgame"

Postby CoffeeCat » Wed May 09, 2007 11:38 pm

^ I'd hate to say it, but so would Picard.

I actually watched "The Caretaker" again very recently and I should comment that Janeway must have had the stupidest crew from the start. I can't figure out why her so called "observer" (Tom Paris: The man who had the least reason to return to the Alpha Quadrant) was doing more than anyone else to save their sorry butts. In rhetrospect, it was ridiculous from the start.

Nothing wrong with the premise, the actors, or the the characters in general (when written in character) - it had to do with crappy writing. It seems to me that the people who claimed to be the "writers" of Star Trek were trying to do everyone elses job but their own - it's evident by the way they had the make up artists dress their cast.
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