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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Kevin Thomas Riley » Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:06 pm

Good scene and I think you did a good job with Hoshi.

Heh, I liked this part:

According to the gossip she'd heard at STC during her last visit there, it was common knowledge that Endeavour was the one assignment that every officer or enlisted crewman wanted. At least, as long as Trip Tucker and his Vulcan first mate were in command.

BTW, you describe Jupiter Station as being "spider-like". You have seen how it looks like in other Treks? http://memory-alpha.org/en/wiki/Jupiter_Station
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:11 pm

Kevin Thomas Riley wrote:BTW, you describe Jupiter Station as being "spider-like". You have seen how it looks like in other Treks? http://memory-alpha.org/en/wiki/Jupiter_Station

2376 - 2157 = 219 years. The current incarnation of Jupiter Station may not even survive the E/R War...

But no, I hadn't seen that before. It appears that the instances where we see it was on VOY so it's probably not a surprise that I hadn't seen it before...
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby JadziaKathryn » Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:12 pm

I like space-savvy Hoshi. Lovely to see her and hear about Malcolm Jr. What's Malcolm up to in Sec. 31, anyway?

How typical of bureaucracy, that regulators which don't work have to be installed. Rolling Eyes I see some things haven't changed.
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Jedikatie » Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:20 pm

Very Apollo 13-like, I think. (That whole bit where they had to create a way to use the square CO2 command module filter in the round hole of the LEM so the crew didn't die of carbon dioxide poisoning...)

And a nice way to get Hoshi back into the swing of things, even if it's only temporary. Can't wait to see more of her. Smile
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Kevin Thomas Riley » Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:22 pm

Rigil Kent wrote:
Kevin Thomas Riley wrote:BTW, you describe Jupiter Station as being "spider-like". You have seen how it looks like in other Treks? http://memory-alpha.org/en/wiki/Jupiter_Station

2376 - 2157 = 219 years. The current incarnation of Jupiter Station may not even survive the E/R War...

But no, I hadn't seen that before. It appears that the instances where we see it was on VOY so it's probably not a surprise that I hadn't seen it before...

I know about the time difference. I just wanted to point out that site.

And hey, who knows, maybe the ENT era version shares design similarities. Then again, it might not... Wink
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Kevin Thomas Riley » Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:24 pm

JadziaKathryn wrote:How typical of bureaucracy, that regulators which don't work have to be installed. Rolling Eyes I see some things haven't changed.

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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Mitchell » Tue Jun 05, 2007 2:31 am

Also they pretty much established that in the 22nd century that Jupiter Station was used for upgrading, an service to starships, since they had specialised crews station there, ment to carry out specific upgrades, an repairs to the NX-01. Something the 24th century version Jupiter Station didnt look capable of, An I think by that point it was mainly a Research facility primarly.

Cool Or heck who says their has to be one single structure at Jupiter Station.
Although I doubt they kept one staion for 250+ years.


Awesome first 3 scenes Rigil. Cool

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Loved Hoshi's trip with the tech crew to the Endeavour.
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Tue Jun 05, 2007 2:41 am

Mitchell wrote:Confused I must be odd.

Well, now that you mention it... Raspberry

Since I found Daniels less annoyin then Archer ever was.

Sigh.

I'm afraid you're not going to like the rest of this series, man. Archer isn't going away. He isn't going to get shot out an airlock or get eaten by tribbles or any of the horrible deaths you'd probably like to see. I'm not going to write a Bash Archer fic just 'cause I didn't like him on the show. I didn't like a lot of what they had either T'Pol or Trip do on the show either (especially T'Pol). Archer is here to stay.

Course you'll probably just turn this into a devistation defeat for Earth.

Probably. Just to honk you off. Raspberry

Sory Just a tad bit tired of seeing Earth ships gettin pasted.

Well, it's not like they've got many more to lose ... Twisted Evil
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby CX » Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:15 am

I'm surprised no one else has said anything about the obvious Quantum Leap referance yet. Mr. Green

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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:18 am

It was pretty obvious, wasn't it? Cool
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby JadziaKathryn » Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:56 am

^That would require having seen Quantum Leap.

I never loathed Archer as much as some people apparently did, although he gets on my nerves more now when I think about it, but at any rate I really like how Rigil has molded Archer into a genuinely good leader, if *sigh* a tragic figure.
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:58 am

Does it date me to state how my fond memories of Quantum Leap are directly responsible for me tuning into Enterprise after having given up on the Trek franchise during TNG?
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby JadziaKathryn » Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:02 am

Well, considering I have no idea when Quantum Leap was on, no. Smile
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:04 am

1989 to 1993. Quantum Leap on Wiki
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Tue Jun 05, 2007 6:24 am

I've got a class starting tomorrow ... er ... today that is an 8 week class, so there may be some delays. I've got a very good head start (I'm not gonna tell you how far along I am beyond stating that I've written three non-human scenes ... and I really like al of them). So, if I hit any of those delays, I apologize...

Act One, Scene Three is up.

Command briefings...

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