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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby justTripn » Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:05 pm

Whoopsie. Let me see if I can knock off some syllables:

Yeah, we hit it off
No! A perfect gentleman!
What?!! You're kiddin’ me . . .


The PG-13 version:

Yeah, we hit it off
No! A perfect gentleman!
@#%*!! You're kiddin’ me . . .
I'm donating my body to science fiction.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby lfvoy » Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:26 pm

*dies* :clap:
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:36 pm

Fishsticks was my first thought. But no. It's Unexpected, isn't it? Brilliant!

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Sun Jan 29, 2012 2:12 am

Are you ready to try a haiku, Cogito?

Go for it.
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby justTripn » Sun Jan 29, 2012 1:54 pm

Your guess is correct! Go, Cogito!
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Sun Jan 29, 2012 2:17 pm

OK, jus' gimme a minute here ...

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Sun Jan 29, 2012 2:30 pm

It's a cheap shot, but the little grey cells are still asleep over here ...

Whitespace calls to her.
He is gone; too long alone.
Would she see him here?

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Silverbullet » Sun Jan 29, 2012 2:49 pm

Grey (Gray) cells asleep. Yep.

I know the episode but I cannot thnk of the name of it. Not unusual.

Oh well, I don't understand sylables (sp) anyway

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby panyasan » Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:06 pm

Affliction?
Love is a verb.

Chapter 17 of Word of Ice is up!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/17/World-of-Ice

The Naked Truth and other necessities of life

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:33 pm

panyasan wrote:Affliction?


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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby panyasan » Sun Jan 29, 2012 6:58 pm

I hope I got it right with the syllables:

Hands shoved the food
into her mouth - her eyes
locked and ravenous
Love is a verb.

Chapter 17 of Word of Ice is up!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/17/World-of-Ice

The Naked Truth and other necessities of life

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12056258/1 ... es-of-life

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:20 pm

By my counting that's 4, 6, 5.

I think we've been short changed. :(

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:49 pm

Hands shovéd the food
into her mouth - her eyés
locked and ravenous

Try it now, Cogito.

Heh heh. My literature students call this cheating, but poets used to do it all the time.
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:11 pm

Well, now that it scans properly I can see at once that it's about Bounty. :)

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Sun Jan 29, 2012 10:23 pm

Your turn, and you KNOW we'll be counting those syllables!
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