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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:35 pm

Distracted wrote:Could it be Trip watching baby Elizabeth die in Terra Prime?


No, no it wasn't, although I feel sure there's many a beautiful haiku waiting to be written about that.

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Sim having one last look at T'Pol before Phlox put him under.


It's been pointed out that she probably wasn't present in this scene. Well, I maintain that she probably was there, but just out of camera shot.

By way of apology, let me offer you this attempt, which is either better or worse - I can't decide which.


Aged beauty cracks.
Intimacy must be earned.
She carries it well.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:16 am

Grrr. How can you expect us to guess the episode when you put stuff in that was never on screen?

About the new one. I remember the scene but not the episode. Gotta go look it up. Anybody want to try to beat me to it?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:25 am

E2 - T'Pold?

(And noooooo way do I think T'Pol was in sickbay when they put Sim under.)
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:27 am

Too late. It's Zero Hour. 8)

Or maybe not. Who's right, Cogito?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:36 am

Distracted wrote:Too late. It's Zero Hour. 8)

Or maybe not. Who's right, Cogito?


You're right, of course!

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:40 am

Ah, of course. (I was thinking of T'Pold's make up...aged beauty cracks indeed... :vulcan: )
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:41 am

Okay. Hmmm.

Bromelain's the key
The road to his guarded heart
Is paved in sweetness
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby lfvoy » Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:02 am

Silent Enemy :)
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:27 am

Yes, indeedy. Go for it, girl. :clap:
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby lfvoy » Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:24 pm

Not so simple now
An enemy assisted
And now we can track

...not the greatest, but...
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:51 pm

Hmmm. Once again, that one scans well but I can't off the top of my head think of an episode where Enterprise was helped by an enemy to track something or someone. I guess it's been way too long since I watched the show. Anybody else have a clue?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:08 pm

The Shipment? (Arboreals, kemocite)?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby lfvoy » Wed Jan 25, 2012 11:53 pm

Alelou wrote:The Shipment? (Arboreals, kemocite)?


Bingo! Your turn....
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:22 am

Oops. That's what happens when you guess right. Well, here goes nothing.

Better hold on, he says.
Hold on to what, I wonder --
To logic? Or him?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Distracted » Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:30 am

I love it. :D
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