We ain't winding it up. It is just getting started. We just wound up this chapter.
It was a back breaker for some reason, that's all. You know how it goes. Some stories come easy. Some stories fight you. This one was savage.
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"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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Goody! So there will be lots more! But please do a humorous one or something else between these that fight you. I am sure they all will be fun to read. BTW I just submitted my Day the Earth Stood Still story to Triaxian Silk.
Working on a major fan fic project. Two-thirds done. Hope to put it up in the not TOO distant future.
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Linda wrote: ... Day the Earth Stood Still...
Even the title is exciting!
Well yes. I continue to write. And on Fanfiction.Net, for those who want, it is possible to cast a glance at my latest efforts. We arrived to
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
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Good. You should get some interesting comments on that one.
"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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Read Chapter 3 of the Lerteiran Chronicles over on the Guardian of Forever. A rich, refreshing story as always! If this is what comes out of you two fighting...keep on fighting. 
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I too, have read "The Lerteiran Chronicles", chapter 3 and, as I said on "the Guardian of Forever", I must tell it.
Even if I enjoyed "The Lerteiran Chronicles" since the beginning, it was lightly "foreign" to me. Honestly, I was liking it, but not in every part.
This time it's totally different, and - believe me - not only because there's many (and splendidly well done) passages about the love story of my loved couple.
(You were right, Distracted!)
The fact is that everything is made with real care.
Everything works very well.
And the pace is perfect.
And besides... how much ideas!
Really great!
Even if I enjoyed "The Lerteiran Chronicles" since the beginning, it was lightly "foreign" to me. Honestly, I was liking it, but not in every part.
This time it's totally different, and - believe me - not only because there's many (and splendidly well done) passages about the love story of my loved couple.
(You were right, Distracted!) The fact is that everything is made with real care.
Everything works very well.
And the pace is perfect.
And besides... how much ideas!
Really great!
Well yes. I continue to write. And on Fanfiction.Net, for those who want, it is possible to cast a glance at my latest efforts. We arrived to
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
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I think this was your best one yet (a little tnt goodness never hurts either 
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The story and action were really great, well paced and flowed really well. Looking forward to the next installment...
...same Vulcan time... same Vulcan channel
)The story and action were really great, well paced and flowed really well. Looking forward to the next installment...
...same Vulcan time... same Vulcan channel
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Just read chapter 3. What a great way to end a snowy day, which you would not expect just north of Mississippi in March. I find the Vulcan Captain hilarious. It is obvious she has not dealt with humans before. She needs lots of meditation time. The observation about Archer having fangs was exactly like things you think about people when you first meet them.
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Oh yeah. That reminds me, in case nobody noticed yet. Part three is now up on TriS.
"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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Re: chapter 3
Lest my praise be too fulsome, I will communicate in smileys.
Lest my praise be too fulsome, I will communicate in smileys.
It's flavored with passionfruit
an appropriate ingredient, don't you think?
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She's done it to me again...
You will regret this, Lady. They are going to end up settling the issue with a stylus duel over the briefing room table. I swear they will...
"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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It's flavored with passionfruit
an appropriate ingredient, don't you think?
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blacknblue wrote::faint:
She's done it to me again...
You will regret this, Lady. They are going to end up settling the issue with a stylus duel over the briefing room table. I swear they will...
Huh? What are you talking about? Are you talking to ME? What'd I do this time?
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You left me with unresolved conflict to play with. You KNOW what happens when I have unresolved conflict to play with.
*rubs hands with evil cackle of glee*
"Muwahahahaha!"
*rubs hands with evil cackle of glee*
"Muwahahahaha!"
"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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