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Re: Print T/T'P Update: Kobayashi Maru book now available

Postby Asso » Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:52 pm

Linda wrote:Finished the book. Several things are left hanging so I presume there will be a sequel. By the time a sequel comes out, I will have forgotten the points left hanging. The two main criticisms I had in my earlier spoiler boxes still hold. But the book WAS a good read. The action moved quickly with many plot twists attached. I did not get bored. The descriptions, especially of explosions, were good. Also the humor carried me along.

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I did think the Klingon gay couple was gratuitous, just an add for the purpose of saying "we're here and we're queer - hey gay people exist here on earth and they should be in the ST universe too". As long as a gay couple was put in, I would have liked to see their characters developed more - flesh them out, give them more than a 'walk on' part.

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Postby Linda » Fri Sep 12, 2008 7:24 pm

Asso, what was frightening to you? :dunno:
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Postby Asso » Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:06 pm

Linda, you have to look at the smily I did put in! :D
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Postby Zane Gray » Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:51 pm

About the issues you spoke of...

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I actually like the fact that T'Pol was struggling with her missing of Trip, and that she would sacrifice potentially everything to try to save him, including her career. The reality is, she was taken to this emotional, uncertain place by the series itself, and just left there. So the books have to deal with that. She can't suddenly be a strong person again in these books just because we as readers want her to be. The writers have to make that recovery happen organically over time. T'Pol lost her mother, she lost her daughter, she thought she lost Trip and now she's missing him deeply and worried about him. All as a war is about to start. Healing takes time, and T'Pol has not yet really had the chance to do this. Her pain and emotions all center around Trip, so she really needs discussion time with him to figure things out. But she's rarely able to even see Trip given his current mission, so it would be hard to sort her emotions out anyway, especially given that she feels isolated from the rest of the crew now. She's rather in limbo on that front, without any kind of resolution. I think there's also something about the bond at play here. I keep recalling their shared dream scene from the last book, where Trip melded with her and they made love. I wonder if that meld, even though it didn't happen in physical reality, didn't have some effect on her that she's not yet aware of. As if by melding with T'Pol, even if only in a shared dream, Trip stated something between them, the consequences of which haven't played out yet.

The books aren't as good as some of the best fan fiction, it's true, but then the best fan fiction here usually centers around Trip and T'Pol's relationship specifically, so we get a lot more depth of characterization. We only get a book a year, and they have to deal with a lot more than just Trip and T'Pol. Given that, I feel pretty happy that their relationship has taken on such a high priority in the books.

As for the gay characters in the book, yes it sticks out like a sore thumb, but then seldom does it not in Star Trek. This is one of those cases where you have to just accept it and move on. The fact that it's a little gratuitous doesn't really bother me.

As for Reed and T'Pol not facing more fallout from their actions from Archer, they may yet. Starfleet isn't a military organization and out in deep space these things would tend to fall under captain's discretion. He's realizing just how much he needs them, and I actually think it's interesting that the trust between these four characters (Archer, T'Pol, Phlox and Reed) is a bit frayed because of the Trip cover-up. Though I do agree that Archer probably would at least have checked up on T'Pol or Reed, even just as a friend. The fact that it took so long for anyone to discover their absence seems a bit of a stretch. A few flaws aside, I'd still give the book a good solid 3.5 or 4 stars out of 5. The next book's got a very high bar to clear though, with all this build-up.

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Postby Alelou » Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:27 pm

You guys were enthusing so much I went out and bought the book, though it's mostly for my son. So after he took it to school for study hall reading I 'borrowed' it and attempted to read it from the beginning.

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I ended up skimming through for TnT. It was slimmer pickings than I'd hoped for, though I couldn't complain about the shuttle thing (except that honestly I'd rather have had some good conversation between our heroes than an off-camera sex scene). I also felt rather yanked about. And I just don't care about the rest of it. There's nothing wrong with it, but there's nothing I found all that compelling either. For some reason the Hernandez/Porthos thing, which I know is very minor, just annoyed the hell out of me. It seemed so flip an explanation buried in with lots and lots of other exposition. And I didn't really enjoy watching Valdore watching Trip screw up. Perhaps most of all -- if these authors used the phrase "perhaps for the last time" one more time, I was just going to scream.
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Postby CX » Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:54 am

Starfleet is a military. When there's a war, they are the ones fighting it. Despite all the pathetic attempts by TPTB over the years to say otherwise on screen, and even Roddenberry's statements off screen, when it gets right down to it, in every important way, Starfleet is a military organization, even if it is inept. I've never gotten the fan ... need for Starfleet to be anything but a military force. :vulcan:

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Postby Zane Gray » Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:51 pm

I guess I'd have to disagree with you a bit CX. Unlike today's military forces, Starfleet is first an organization of exploration and then diplomacy. It's military role is absolutely secondary to these. Especially in its early years, Starfleet hadn't fully recognized the need to emphasize the military role. That changed when the Xindi conflict happened, obviously. Wasn't there also a line in the show about Archer and/or the Admiral Forrest being uncomfortable with the MACO forces on board at first? I don't recall. You'll also recall that Trip, Archer and A.J. weren't courtmartialled for stealing the NX-Beta. Had that happened in today's military, they'd be in prison or worse. Can you imagine U.S. Navy officers stealing a prototype naval vessel, and EVER getting a command of their own afterwards? So while Starfleet is patterned after a military organization in many ways, it's just NOT strictly military in many respects.
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Postby CX » Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:44 am

Zane Gray wrote:I guess I'd have to disagree with you a bit CX. Unlike today's military forces, Starfleet is first an organization of exploration and then diplomacy.

I have to disagree quite emphatically with you. I know this is the typical fan thing, but Starfleet is a military, even if it's an inept one and very poorly presented. A military force would take on exploration and diplomatic functions before some civilian organization would take on military roles, because while there is historical precedence for the former, the latter is frankly pretty frakked up, and I have never understood the fan need for something so implausible. In the day of sail, military vessels explored the world's oceans, and even today the military still does a lot of research and exploration. There's more to the military than the tip of the spear, and you have no idea how much it irritates me for people to reduce the military to that. If you look at everything Starfleet has done on the different shows and movies, the modern military already does the vast majority of it.

It's military role is absolutely secondary to these. Especially in its early years, Starfleet hadn't fully recognized the need to emphasize the military role.

Which still shows that it's a military, even if, for whatever reason, it likes to pretend that it isn't.

That changed when the Xindi conflict happened, obviously.

And you don't send a civilian ship representing a civilian organization on a military mission like they did in Season 3 of ENT. Not to mention that in all the previous series, Starfleet has always been show to act as the Federation's military force in any conflict or declared war.

Wasn't there also a line in the show about Archer and/or the Admiral Forrest being uncomfortable with the MACO forces on board at first? I don't recall.

Yes, it showed a few things about B&B in that they were continuing to go along with a comment Roddenberry made earlier about Starfleet supposedly not being a military, and that they have a complete lack of understanding of the military. This goes right along with their complete lack of understanding of what leadership looks like too, so it isn't all that surprising or anything, it's just continued ineptitude. But despite what's said on or off screen, Starfleet both looks and acts like a military.

You'll also recall that Trip, Archer and A.J. weren't courtmartialled for stealing the NX-Beta. Had that happened in today's military, they'd be in prison or worse. Can you imagine U.S. Navy officers stealing a prototype naval vessel, and EVER getting a command of their own afterwards? So while Starfleet is patterned after a military organization in many ways, it's just NOT strictly military in many respects.

Which is, as I've stated, an example of ineptitude, but it hardly shows that Starfleet isn't a military force. This is also something involving the show's main characters, and just like any other show where the characters pull something that should by rights end their careers and possibly land them behind bars, it never does.

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Postby Linda » Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:45 pm

This debate about whether Starfleet is or is not a military organization is very interesting. While Zane Gray makes some good points, and reminds me of Roddenberry's intentions, I have to agree more with CX. There will always be conflict between political entities and some form of military organization has to be there to deal with it in addition to the diplomatic core. So other than Starfleet, what is there? Who else could provide this function?

I see Starfleet as a multi-mission organization, somewhat like the Coast Guard is today with its environmental protection mission, recreational boating safety mission, police and military missions. But when the Coast Guard is in military mode, it is full military mode. It is difficult for me to see people in Starfleet getting away with stuff that would not be tolerated in a military organization, it kind of takes me out of suspension of disbelief for a bit, but I get back into the story pretty quick because I like the characters and just the whole fascination of being out there in space.

But with all its flaws, I still love Star Trek, and I will still watch whatever comes on the screen and continue to read the books. I guess I will just have to overlook the flaws, though I will mention them in the way of constructive criticism. I rejoice to see the Trip/T'Pol romanmce continue, though I too am irritated with its on again, off again nature. But Alelou, I do like all the political and military and spy stuff going on in addition to the romance. I like the creation of alien worlds with the different politics, view points, alien physical and cultural differences , even things like architecture, technology, the varying environments of different planets. Descriptions of these things and long background explanations do not bore me, though I like action too.
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Postby Asso » Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:10 pm

I don't be able to remember exactly where, but elsewhere, on another thread, I said I am under the impression that, in spite of the undeniable exploratory vocation of StarFleet, there's something vaguely militaristic in its organization.
And it seems to me logical, someway, because the start of the Space Exploration happens after the troubles of a great war. In my opinion, the Human society of that period, had to be militaristic as a whole.
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Postby Alelou » Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:32 pm

Linda wrote:But Alelou, I do like all the political and military and spy stuff going on in addition to the romance. I like the creation of alien worlds with the different politics, view points, alien physical and cultural differences , even things like architecture, technology, the varying environments of different planets. Descriptions of these things and long background explanations do not bore me, though I like action too.


I think that's great, Linda. It just didn't do it for me. I had the same problem with the first book. I can enjoy that stuff in other stories -- Lerteirian Chronicles, for one, or Purgatory, or Rigil Kent's stuff. Here, it just doesn't do it for me. I'm not sure why, and I don't really even want to invest the time to figure it out, though I suspect it's something to do with the feeling of being jerked around a bit on the TnT front. It may also simply be that my list of things to do is too long at the moment and I find it more relaxing to read stuff here or pick up where I left off in the current Maisie Dobbs mystery.
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Postby Linda » Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:14 pm

LOL, Alelou, I know about 'to do lists 'also! That is the reason I have not written anything over the summer and the fall is shaping up so I don't have much time for myself either. Stress levels being high - hit after hit from family or at work. So I understand having to cut out the 'nonessentials'. I will try to remember that Alelou wants romance, not politics when I finally get to writing my next Trip/T'Pol story. 8)
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Postby Alelou » Mon Sep 15, 2008 4:08 pm

Hey, please don't even pause to think about Alelou when you're writing.

To quote Virginia Woolf: "So long as you write what you wish to write, that is all that matters: and whether it matters for ages or only for hours, nobody can say."

(Though I doubt anything in the category of fanfic will ever matter for ages. It's just fun.)
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Postby evcake » Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:12 pm

"To seek out new life and new civilizations" seems pretty plain to me. If Gene had meant "To kick alien butt" he woulda said so. Personally I find enough conflict with alien of the week without having a neverending war going on. But that's just me.
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Postby Zane Gray » Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:34 pm

CX wrote:I have to disagree quite emphatically with you. I know this is the typical fan thing, but Starfleet is a military, even if it's an inept one and very poorly presented. A military force would take on exploration and diplomatic functions before some civilian organization would take on military roles, because while there is historical precedence for the former, the latter is frankly pretty frakked up, and I have never understood the fan need for something so implausible. In the day of sail, military vessels explored the world's oceans, and even today the military still does a lot of research and exploration. There's more to the military than the tip of the spear, and you have no idea how much it irritates me for people to reduce the military to that. If you look at everything Starfleet has done on the different shows and movies, the modern military already does the vast majority of it.


Good points, but I still disagree. Clearly you seem irritated, at least that's the impression you give. Not my intent, by the way. But I think you missed my point, or perhaps I didn't state it clearly enough. My point is that at the time of ENTERPRISE, Starfleet was NOT designed to be a military (and no one associated with Starfleet thinks of it as a military), even though it shares many organizational aspects of a military. I certainly believe that by Kirk's time, Starfleet IS for all practical purposes a military organization, especially once the MACOs have been absorbed by Starfleet. But to me, the UESPA of Archer's day is the near-future equivilant of NASA, ESA, NASDA and Roskosmos combined into a global civilian-based space agency. NASA today, is NOT a military organization, even though many of its astronauts (and even some of its leaders) come out of the military, still hold their rank and the actual crews are designed around the military command structure. NASA is a government-run, civilian space exploration agency. It seems to me that the goal of the UESPA was basically the same as NASA: To further human exploration into deep space by developing, operating and supporting advanced warp-capable starships. The military component at the time was considered as an afterthought only. Keep in mind, we know that Reed almost joined the Navy at one point before Starfleet, so there ARE still traditional military services on Earth at the time (the MACOs would be another, and we can presume there are more). Archer himself even says that he disagreed with the idea of arming Enterprise at first. It was only after all the hostile encounters that he appreciated the need to carry weapon systems, but he still regrets it. So I agree with you that Starfleet, later, IS the military arm of the UFP. Without doubt. But in Archer's time, it's just not there yet (the evolution is only just beginning, catalyzed by the Xindi attack and the impending Romulan War), which impacts the way Archer commands his ship. This, in part, helps to explain why Archer is lax with Reed and T'Pol when they return from having stolen a shuttle. On a similar note, I see a number of complaints about how Hernandez and Archer don't make proper tactical decisions in this book, and again, I believe it's because they don't have the military mind-set or training that later Starship Captains do. I don't think either of them ever went to war college or studied military tactics during their time at Starfleet. I'd bet their training was focused almost exclusively on science, alien cultures, space flight ops, engineering and diplomacy, not the use of force. They thought of themselves as explorers first and foremost, and the need to adopt military tactical training came later. In the case of Archer and Hernandez, I would argue, it was mostly on-the-job training. We, all of us as Star Trek fans, have 35 years of familiarity with Starfleet as the military arm of the UFP. But the whole point of Enterprise is that the Starfleet of Archer's time is NOT the same as we see it later. We're seeing the evolution of Starfleet from what it started out as, into what we know it will become. And my belief if that Starfleet, circa 2155, is only just starting to think of itself as a military force tasked with defending Earth and its allies - and it's been forced into that role by external events. I mean, you'd THINK, if they fully appreciated their role as an Earth defense force, they'd have built more than just 2 or 3 NX class starships. Because they're about to face a war with the Romulans with Enterprise, Columbia and Challenger, backed by an unknown number of Intrepid class ships. Not exactly an impressive fighting force.

Starfleet and the UESPA, from their founding up until the Xindi attack, just never considered themselves a true military organization tasked with Earth defense or the projection of force of any kind. THAT is my point. And if you accept that premise, the actions of Starfleet's leadership and Archer and Hernandez, both in the series and these books, make a whole lot more sense.
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