Bnb's "Purgatory"
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Re: Bnb's "Purgatory"
Eagerly awaiting 
It's flavored with passionfruit
an appropriate ingredient, don't you think?
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Damn it! I must wait! 
Well yes. I continue to write. And on Fanfiction.Net, for those who want, it is possible to cast a glance at my latest efforts. We arrived to
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
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Blackn'blue's Purgatory Chapter 8 is up!
I'm donating my body to science fiction.
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I just finished this chapter and it, as well as the whole story is excellent. I know writer's want constructive criticism, and I don't know if "keep doing what you're doing" counts but it is as close as I can get it. I like the way BnB shows and develops his characters. They are somewhat toned down. Remember all these people have to be very goal oriented or they wouldn't be in space, so I think the characters as he presents them are more realistic and sympathetic than they were on the show. I even like his Archer. And I have a hard time with Archer because Scott Bakula looks, acts, and sounds like my daughter's nutty ex-coach in fencing. Or maybe the ex-coach tried to look, sound and act like Bakula. 
There is some fantastic writing that is contributed to this site by all the authors. It is, to me, far beyond the level of the work on the series. I do wonder if any of the actors, or production people ever come over here and look.
Anyway, good job, dude.
There is some fantastic writing that is contributed to this site by all the authors. It is, to me, far beyond the level of the work on the series. I do wonder if any of the actors, or production people ever come over here and look.
Anyway, good job, dude.
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Thank you. I can't say it enough. For us writers, this feedback is the only pay of any kind that we get. It is HUGE deal to hear back from people who actually read the stuff we write. Even if you don't like it, it is important to us that you take a minute to scribble off a quick response. It makes all the difference in the world to us. It makes the difference between continuing a series or giving up and quitting because we don't believe anyone cares. Thank you again.
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"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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blacknblue wrote: ...It makes the difference between continuing a series or giving up and quitting because we don't believe anyone cares. ...
Do you believe really, Bnb, that "anyone cares"?
Ah ah!
My comment is late because I'm reading the whole story, again! Well yes. I continue to write. And on Fanfiction.Net, for those who want, it is possible to cast a glance at my latest efforts. We arrived to
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
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I haven't been reading anything lately because I've been writing, but don't give up because others don't read your stories. Many are and not commenting.
I have read your stories up to chapter 7 of Purgatory and enjoy them very much. Remember it may not be read now, it may not be read until next year, but if it is out here someone will read it.
I have read your stories up to chapter 7 of Purgatory and enjoy them very much. Remember it may not be read now, it may not be read until next year, but if it is out here someone will read it.
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