Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

[JadziaKathryn]

I have to admit, I didn't see that coming. And I should have.

Yep. What he said. This caught me by surprise.

I like the line about Nate still hoping to die very old, although it's looking less and less likely.

Hmm. I don't know about the rest of you, but I want a Flodot action figure.

[Shakabutt]

Wow ,i never expected the last chapter either .

I think Eisler is the coolest carachter in your universe ,not even D'deridex matches him , can't wait to see him in action when all hell brakes lose ,and i would be really dissapointed if he were to die.

And i like the bloosoming relantionship he has with Hess ,ala Trip/T'pol only that she is the crazy half and he is the definittion of professionalism ,except when he is arround her

And another interesting thing ,apparentlly section 31 is a midget compared to Red Sabre,can't wait to hear more about it and their special projects .

As usual ,Rigil you deliver the best chapters ,keep up the gret work

[krn]

'Red Sabre Operative' Hienrick Eisler in full spec-ops tac gear

'Meditative Serenity' T'Pol - with light-up candles and Flodot

[Rigil Kent]

And another interesting thing ,apparentlly section 31 is a midget compared to Red Sabre,can't wait to hear more about it and their special projects .

Not true. It might look that way, but it wouldn't be accurate to say that. Think of Red Sabre as Delta Force, or SEAL Team Six whereas the section is more along the lines of a 1950s or 1960s CIA assassination team. If you put a spook up against a trained killer in a one-on-one encounter, the killer is likely to win...

And krn, it's "Heinrich." Although he loathes his first name...

presents...

Act Three, Scene Four.

Seeking the unseen...

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Up at Fanfiction.net for those of you who prefer it there.

This one's dedicated to tennisgirl who saw the homage to MissAnnThropic's Cry Havoc ...

[nikitee]

Woooo hoooo! Time to hunt! Exhausted!T'Pol is spot on, Rigil... great chapter. I enjoy the T'Pol/Phlox interactions; they have a very interesting relationship.

[krn]

And krn, it's "Heinrich." Although he loathes his first name...

picky, picky

(and no, I can't spell)

Besides, printing mistakes always get more money in the secondary market.

[Reanok]

T'Pol was really great in this chapter spot on and telling Phlox about finding more fusion bombs great stuff in this chapter. Let's hope they hunt the Romulans down.

[Rigil Kent]

Fission bombs, not fusion. There's a difference...

[evcake]

I like last scene very much.

[blacknblue]

And now it hits the fan. And now Chulak is discredited when Endeavor eats his pet ship for breakfast, and the real brains takes over the Romulan war effort.

Ouch.

And I predict earthquakes in divers places throughout Starfleet command very soon as they hunt for the traitor begins...

[Rigil Kent]

Wow. Lotta assumptions there.

[JadziaKathryn]

At her direction, every ship in the Sol System had linked their sensors together to form.

To form what?

Umm, dare I ask what happened to the actual Saratoga?

I too like the Phlox/T'Pol interaction, and the comet Trip named after T'Pol. That is a nice sweet touch.

[Rigil Kent]

At her direction, every ship in the Sol System had linked their sensors together to form.

To form what?

Whoops. Dunno how I missed that. That paragraph now reads:

Her sensor board chirped, informing her that the latest adjustments to the sweep pattern were now going active. At her direction, every ship in the Sol System had linked their scanners together to form a system wide sensor net. Boomer transports, Neptune-classes, Iceland-classes, Daedalus-classes, even the Tellarite and Vulcan ambassadorial ships currently in Earth orbit were joining together to scan the system.

I think I was going to make some changes, and then got distracted with writing the space battle scene of act 4. I'm likely to still tweak it though: that adjusted line just doesn't flow...

Umm, dare I ask what happened to the actual Saratoga?

Heh. The Romulans sent them a transmission of the most popular kiddie show back on ch'Rihan (Romulus) and that caused every human mind aboard to liquify. If you thought the Teletubbies were bad...

the comet Trip named after T'Pol. That is a nice sweet touch.

It seemed like something he would do. She probably doesn't see the point though.

[Mitchell]

OMG!!! Its a good thing T'Pol aint human. Cause I think Ol Trip would get slapped upside the head for Naming a massive frozzen chunk of ice after her.


Neat scene between Phlox an T'Pol. Course If I were in her shoes, I would of just told him Id go off duty, when he found someone that actualy could take over for me.

Ok If the Rommie ship is possin as the "Saratoga", then how are they pulling that off? Cause shouldnt the Saratoga, an all friendly ships have their warp cores online? (Since Id Imagine they all would need warp drive inorder to rid the system of the Rommie garbage tug once it was located.) So How are these Rommies fakin the sensor sig of an active warp core, when their's is actualy offline? They runnin their Impulse drive on overload or somethin?


BTW: Saratoga is my 2nd all time fav ship name, after Enterprise ofcourse.

[blacknblue]

Wow. Lotta assumptions there.

Not assumptions. Logical deductions based on my understanding of your twisted mind and the back story to date.