Postby Rigil Kent » Wed Aug 01, 2007 5:45 pm
Delurking for a moment to add my thoughts since KTR pestered me about it...
Forgive my bluntness here, but bringing in a baby like this is the domain of fanfic, not a Trek show. By having them suddenly have a kid, the show will have officially become a soap opera and will lose a lot of viewers.
Some of the elements I've seen here I like: justTrip'n's idea about using the marriage between Human and Vulcan being an allegory for gay marriage would be really neat if the modern Trek franchise didn't have a reputation for always doing such things wrong (case in point: Fusion. Moral of the story? Don't press charges against the rapist Or that inane Dear Doctor episode). Instead of it being an allegory, what we'd get is Hollywood lecturing, which is almost always off-putting to a large segment of the population. I rather like the idea of them never marrying (officially), but basically having a common law marriage instead. At the same time, I would also like to see the very small marriage ceremony with only the Main Characters present and conducted by Archer, so why not do both? See below.
And in regards to the more standalone episodes, I categorically disagree. They did that with season 1 and 2, and pretty much everyone agrees that those were, hands down, the weakest seasons. I'm fine with a couple of standalones throughout each season (providing they don't feel like ridiculously contrived filler episodes like too many of s3's fillers), but for the most part, I think they should stick to the arc. The problem that I've seen is that never utilized the mini-arcs the way they could have. Ep1 of an arc could have the ship showing up at a planet and opening relations, while ep2 could be an standalone episode ON that planet (like Trip gets in danger, or Travis meets a girl) with only the location of the planet really linking it to the previous episode, and then ep3 could resolve what began in ep1.
Anyway, my thoughts:
Season 5: Begin setting up the Romulan War. Continue the mini-arcs as the crew of ENT continue Federation building. CHANGE THE UNIFORMS! Seriously, find a way to make them bridge uniforms from the bugly jumpsuits to the unis in "The Cage" so T'Pol can start wearing one and look professional instead of "Catsuit!Girl." The TnT relationship moves to the background (they're still together, and learning what it means to be a bonded pair, but aren't the focus.) Mayweather, Reed and Sato are promoted (long, long overdue.) Archer continues his evolution into Leader; with T'Pol and Trip so often together off duty, he is also becoming more distant from the rest of the crew (burden of command and all that.) T'Pol Subplot through season: continuing to study Kir'Shara, learning to meld (from Soval, I suppose). Tucker Subplot through season: SFC hinting at possible promotion, but some of Trip's previous actions (Cogenitor, decision to disobey SFC orders in Vulcan arc) are being readdressed. Phlox is beginning to covertly work on cross-mating research for TnT (although he doesn't tell them this.) Construction of more Starfleet ships ramped up due to concern about the Romulan threat. Return to Vulcan to assist the rebuilding of that society. Bring in a couple new members of the would-be Coalition (that which will become the Federation) - a combined effort masterminded by Archer leads to a Coalition space station (Salem Station) being constructred. NO KLINGONS. Midway through season, Romulans begin attacking Boomer transports. End season with ECS Horizon (Travis' family) arriving at Salem Station just as it is attacked by Romulans.
Season 6: Begin season several weeks after the last season finale. The war has begun, although Earth is still unprepared. Due to the distances involved, engagements are sporadic and few. HIRE A MILITARY CONSULTANT. I'm serious - simply based on s3, it's obvious that this development team doesn't know how to write a war, so they need someone to tell them how things are really done. Abandon 1 season = 1 year, as this season covers two years or something. ENT continues to act as the spearhead of diplomacy, and races from episode to episode, trying to rally Earth's allies. As someone pointed out, Bakula wanted fewer episodes due to family, so we can promote him to the rank of Commodore or something. He is still listed as commanding officer, but is often only in a single scene of an episode (i.e. ep1 of arc has them arrive at a planet where he begins diplomatic stuff; ep2 of that arc has him contact ENT via comm with instructions while he stays planetside until act 5 of ep3.) Travis is disconsolate 'cause his family was killed by Romulans, but he doesn't push everyone away like Trip did in s3. Slowly ratchet up the tension with the war as the Romulans nuke a couple of Earth colonies. Midway through the season, ENT along with COL and a couple of the half-saucers gets into a major space battle with the Romulans (to appease people like me who want space battles); it is a significant defeat for the humans, and ENT limps away. The last half of season 6 should be tense and grim like the last half of season 3 (but without the crappy episodes like Harbinger or Doctor's Orders.) At least one episode should focus on someone other than the Big Three - I like focusing on Phlox as he is temporarily assigned to a medical ship to help with casualties; this ep can be used to look at Denobulan culture or maybe have that doctor from Stigma come back. Season should end with the ENT Team being broken up and reassigned (Archer to commodore/admiral job, T'Pol given ENT but no promotion, Tucker given another NX (heh. Endeavour, perhaps?) but no promotion, Reed becomes Trip's XO, Sato to R&D, Mayweather remains on ENT).
Season 7: Begin season in media res with a massive space battle over a year later. COL destroyed along with a couple of other ships. Andorians come into war (due to Archer's interactions with Shran). Vulcans are still having internal problems, so they can't do more than some technical support (which turns out to be more helpful than Andorian military support.) Having learned some lessons during the war, Starfleet vessels currently travel in pairs or groups for safety (so we can have TnT interact). Mid-season finale should be the final battle of the E/R War with there being lots of casualties, but the Earth forces (augmented by Coalition forces) defeat the Romulans. Last half of the season should revolve around Archer building the Federation and coming into his own. Both TnT are promoted to the rank of captain, and we learn that they are considering resigning from SF to start a family. All other characters are promoted too (Reed to CDR, Mayweather & Sato to LCDR). As the show is ENT, that means Archer uses his old ship to fly around. One thing I'd really want them to address is PTSS. Given the amount of combat these people have seen (for a "science ship", that is), it seems inevitable that someone is going to suffer from combat stress (I'd actually pick Archer or Reed myself, just to be different. Trip has T'Pol to help him through it, T'Pol is Vulcan, etc.) The second to last episode of the series would revolve around signing the Federation Charter, and the series finale would be a low-key affair with the Team together one last time before they ship out to other frontiers. During this final episode, I'd have TnT reveal that they are resigning from Starfleet and moving to Vulcan to start a family; as there are still problems with both Earth and Vulcan laws regarding inter-racial (literally) marriages, they can't really have an official ceremony. Despite that, Trip talks ADM Archer into doing the marriage ceremony aboard ENT with just the Team present ('cause it'd mean a lot to him). And then, just to bookend the series with the way that Broken Bow started, I'd have an older Jonathan Archer interacting with a young Robert April (who is playing with the same starship model that little Jonny Archer was playing with at the beginning of BB.) Have April make some sort of comment like he's going to be a ship's captain someday, and Archer departs to meet up with Trip and T'Pol again.
FADE TO BLACK.
Just my thoughts.
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