Dinah wrote:So we won't be seeing Daniels for awhile. I can't say that breaks my heart.
This is a great first chapter. You conveyed a lot of information in a very few words. Archer now knows there's a spy in Starfleet. And he's pissed. Stand back and turn him loose.
I loved Daniel's parting words. It reminded be of all those murder mysteries where some stupid fool puts 2+2 together and gets four then proceeds to an isolated place to call the detective. He gets as far as, "I know who the murderer is. It's..." and the phone goes dead. The detective now has 2 bodies instead of one.
LOL. I just watched a John Wayne movie like that last week...
At least Daniels gets to come back in 70 years. If Archer's lucky, he'll be long gone by then, and Daniels will be someone else's problem.
...and at least Captain Kirk would have the sense not to put up with him.