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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Reanok » Sun Jun 24, 2007 5:24 pm

Shock Well it seems your story started off with the badguy being named and Archer and Hoshi are being interrogated. Confused And who is making those comments about wanting revenge on Archer? I'm curious about what happens next.

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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Mitchell » Mon Jun 25, 2007 2:58 am

Vulcan WTF Well Its certinly safe to say now, after the end of Grendel that I will never love D'deridex. God I hope those Xindi Reptillians are as stupid as they looked, an acted. Stupid Lizard Sheeple.


Any whos Loved Grendel over all. Cool


As for Medea,,, Laughing Well Im certinly glad that you wont be pullin off an entire scene like that spoiler. It'll probably take me a few more readins to get that one to sink in completely. Laughing
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Mon Jun 25, 2007 2:49 pm

Image presents...

Act One, Scene One of Endeavour: Medea.

"Fleet" Captain Tucker...

=/\= =/\= =/\= =/\= =/\=

Up at Fanfiction.net for those of you who prefer it there.

Progress is slow...
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby nikitee » Mon Jun 25, 2007 7:15 pm

...inexplicably glad that Hyperion under Dan Hsiao was at his back.


Wooooo hoooooo! Dan kept his ship! Yay! Also, lovin' the attack-dog references in regards to Eisler: so right, and for all the right reasons.

Another great chapter! Keep them coming, Rigil! Smile

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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Asso » Mon Jun 25, 2007 7:33 pm

Another great chapter! Very Happy

A consideration: I am reading Elysium (again) and I am experiencing an intense delight (again). I am really curious of to know how the stories that Rigil is writing will arrive to close the circle traced in Elysium.

A sole problem: and if it ends?: Confused
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby hth2k » Mon Jun 25, 2007 9:30 pm

Rapid doberman?

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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Mon Jun 25, 2007 9:55 pm

sigh. Stupid crappy spellchecker. Fixed.
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby blacknblue » Mon Jun 25, 2007 10:35 pm

FINALLY someone moved into yellow alert and red alert. Thank you.
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Mon Jun 25, 2007 11:15 pm

Plus, I got to have Trip make a Captain's Log entry ... something he's not done before (to my shock and horror...)

I tried to come up with a legitimate way of having the red/yellow conditions be Trip or T'Pol's idea, but ultimately decided against it since it would be, IMO, too much fanwank. I have to admit though: I much prefer the nuBSG way of having "conditions" ... "Action stations! Set condition 1 throughout the ship" is just cool sounding...

Asso wrote:A consideration: I am reading Elysium (again) and I am experiencing an intense delight (again).

Thank you kindly.

I am really curious of to know how the stories that Rigil is writing will arrive to close the circle traced in Elysium.

A sole problem: and if it ends?: Confused

That's a couple of questions ... I'll answer as best I can. First, as to how many Endeavour fics remain until I finish, I can't quite answer that yet. The current fic begins on 24 Dec 2157. The E/R War ends at some point in 2160. That leaves all of 2158 and 2159, plus however much of 2160 that I devote to the war. I know the names of the next two fics after Medea (another two-parter ... although the way this one is planned to end, it could be said that this is a three-parter. The next two are Endeavour: Amaterasu and Endeavour: Xolotl respectively.), and I know of a couple other "names" I plan to use at some point down the road (Camlann, Gehenna, Tartarus.) There are a couple of major events that still have to take place (the battle of Galorndon Core and the battle of Cheron, for example). And, of course, there are some casualties yet to come...

As to the question about what happens after the E/R War ends, well ... I have some ideas about that, but honestly don't know whether I'll write them. If I do, they won't be Endeavour fics, so to speak, as Elysium establishes that CPT Tucker & CDR T'Pol resign from Starfleet after the war. Things will make more sense in that regard come Act 1, Scene 3 of Medea ... once I write it, that is.

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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Kevin Thomas Riley » Mon Jun 25, 2007 11:32 pm

Nice beginning (and you know how I feel about the teaser). I laughed at the "Rabid Doberman" thing Laughing as well as Trip calling T'Pol "Polly". She might be annoyed but I think it's kinda sweet. Love Eyes

I wonder if her micro-singularities research will turn out to have some significance for the war...
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby tennisgirl » Tue Jun 26, 2007 1:36 am

I giggled like a little girl (which I'm in my full right to do) when Trip said Polly. Laughing

Great job, Mr. Kent. Now, please make Rick yell a lot at those guys.
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Reanok » Tue Jun 26, 2007 1:44 am

I like Trip calling her Polly and Rick wanting to yell at the other Captains. can't wait to see their reactions. Those titles you mention gehanna I know means an apolyptic battle.Xoloxtl was a god that had a mirror or something similiar that showed eventas that were to come.I don't know what camlann or Amaterasu means Tartarus is self explanatory.

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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Tue Jun 26, 2007 2:08 am

Reanok wrote:Those titles you mention gehanna I know means an apolyptic battle.

Gehenna is a Jewish hell or purgatory actually.

Xoloxtl was a god that had a mirror or something similiar that showed eventas that were to come.

Xolotl is an Aztec god of lightning, death, fire and bad luck.

I don't know what camlann or Amaterasu means

Camlann is the location of the final battle of King Arthur and Amaterasu is a Japanese sun goddess.

Tartarus is self explanatory.

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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby JadziaKathryn » Tue Jun 26, 2007 2:34 am

I'm confused. If we're to assume a couple of months have passed, is a reference to the events of the teaser going to be coming?

Otherwise I liked it. I can picture Eisler quite enjoying chewing out senior officers.
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Re: Rigil's New Endeavour thread...

Postby Rigil Kent » Tue Jun 26, 2007 2:36 am

JadziaKathryn wrote:I'm confused. If we're to assume a couple of months have passed, is a reference to the events of the teaser going to be coming?

The events of the teaser haven't happened yet. Twisted Evil
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